A Yearning Heart
A 2-4-2 poetic form28 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Congratulations on your 2nd placing with this lovely presentation. The image is a perfect accompaniment for your words. Hope might just be wishful thinking but it focuses the mind on the possibility of a good result and can overcome negativity.
Hopefully, we can continue to hope that our situation isn't hopeless.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Congratulations on your 2nd placing with this lovely presentation. The image is a perfect accompaniment for your words. Hope might just be wishful thinking but it focuses the mind on the possibility of a good result and can overcome negativity.
Hopefully, we can continue to hope that our situation isn't hopeless.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your lovely message in your review. I appreciate your wonderful comments, Lisa!
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
Melissa,
This is a wonderfully true sentiment. Hope is always burning in a heart that looks for its meaning. The artwork use both the open hands and the candlelight as symbols of hope.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Melissa,
This is a wonderfully true sentiment. Hope is always burning in a heart that looks for its meaning. The artwork use both the open hands and the candlelight as symbols of hope.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your lovely message in your review. I appreciate your wonderful comments, Joan!
Melissa
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Don't mention it, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from artisart4u
It is good when a person can least hope. Hope is better than nothing.
Having hope keeps people from doing bad things.
You have the right amount of syllables for each line.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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It is good when a person can least hope. Hope is better than nothing.
Having hope keeps people from doing bad things.
You have the right amount of syllables for each line.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. Please forgive my tardy response!!!
Regards,
Melissa
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I saw that you won 2nd place in 2-4-2. So I read your poem and I wanted to tell you that this was in only six words, one that touches an emotional stirring that there is always hppe.
The illustration accelerates your strong message.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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I saw that you won 2nd place in 2-4-2. So I read your poem and I wanted to tell you that this was in only six words, one that touches an emotional stirring that there is always hppe.
The illustration accelerates your strong message.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. Please forgive my tardy response!!!
Regards,
Melissa
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No problem at all.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Now...That's a perfect 2-4-2 . For, it goes deeper than
the naked eye...in a world, where love is so underrated.
Therefore, you've said a thousand words in such a short
display. Nevertheless, you did your thing. Keep Writing.
And don't forget to stop by, and talk to me. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Now...That's a perfect 2-4-2 . For, it goes deeper than
the naked eye...in a world, where love is so underrated.
Therefore, you've said a thousand words in such a short
display. Nevertheless, you did your thing. Keep Writing.
And don't forget to stop by, and talk to me. Stay Connected
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Hello there! Thank you for the lovely review!!
Melissa
Comment from Mark D. R.
Such feeling in few words Melissa! Your illustration just elevates that moment/spirit.
Let's hope that 2022 will be a good year for all of us.
Mark
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Such feeling in few words Melissa! Your illustration just elevates that moment/spirit.
Let's hope that 2022 will be a good year for all of us.
Mark
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the lovely words, Mark!
Melissa
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I liked this poem and the sentiment it expresses. The necessary word you used the expresses the entire idea perfectly is "yearning." Indeed, without it, there is no hope. Good job!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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I liked this poem and the sentiment it expresses. The necessary word you used the expresses the entire idea perfectly is "yearning." Indeed, without it, there is no hope. Good job!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Hello Verna. Thank you so much.
Melissa
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Yes, a fine entry for the 2-4-2 contest.
In only six words, the message is loud and clear - hope - something to positively be held onto. I also really like how the cupped hands mimic a heart with the candle acting as burning hope. Very good coupling of words and visual. Great job!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Yes, a fine entry for the 2-4-2 contest.
In only six words, the message is loud and clear - hope - something to positively be held onto. I also really like how the cupped hands mimic a heart with the candle acting as burning hope. Very good coupling of words and visual. Great job!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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So appreciate your opinion and comments, DD. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from Aussie
Good luck with your contest entry. The candles in the hand showed ebbing hope. We sometimes we yearn for things and wonder why we don't get them. The message in your poem tells a story in three little lines. Well done. K xx
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Good luck with your contest entry. The candles in the hand showed ebbing hope. We sometimes we yearn for things and wonder why we don't get them. The message in your poem tells a story in three little lines. Well done. K xx
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you Kace. I appreciate your insightful comments so much!! :)
Melissa
Comment from royowen
There's always hope Melissa, while we still live we can expect God to be with us, no matter what. This is a lovely message, and that artwork give it a special poignancy, well done Melissa, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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There's always hope Melissa, while we still live we can expect God to be with us, no matter what. This is a lovely message, and that artwork give it a special poignancy, well done Melissa, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Melissa
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Welcome Melissa
