Fredrick Fear
He's always near...17 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent poem - so well written, and the theme is very relevant. You have a great image, and the presentation to suit. The rhyme is excellent, as is the metre and flow. Best wishes for this carefully composed entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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An excellent poem - so well written, and the theme is very relevant. You have a great image, and the presentation to suit. The rhyme is excellent, as is the metre and flow. Best wishes for this carefully composed entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this great review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
A great tale about Fredrick Fear. He's evil and follows trouble to make sure that people have fear and worry about the trouble properly. He's sure been busy this past two years with covid. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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A great tale about Fredrick Fear. He's evil and follows trouble to make sure that people have fear and worry about the trouble properly. He's sure been busy this past two years with covid. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from dellsworthpoet
Fredrick is not easy to avoid. A nice personification.
The poem flows well. The rhymes are not forced. The poem stays on point. A few more nasty sounding words like dire and dastardly would add a bitter edge.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Fredrick is not easy to avoid. A nice personification.
The poem flows well. The rhymes are not forced. The poem stays on point. A few more nasty sounding words like dire and dastardly would add a bitter edge.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review, I probably should have made it a little darker. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Frederick Fear"
This is a Personification of an Emotional Poem writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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"Frederick Fear"
This is a Personification of an Emotional Poem writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Wow! Thank you for this exceptional review, I'll have a big head for the rest of the night. ;) I really appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from John Ciarmello
Great piece of poetry here! the metaphoric character Frederick fear is genius. I hope I never get to meet him though. Thanks for the read it was smooth and well written
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Great piece of poetry here! the metaphoric character Frederick fear is genius. I hope I never get to meet him though. Thanks for the read it was smooth and well written
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you, it means a lot to me that you took time to read my poem. :)
Comment from royowen
A fine entry in this personification of emotion contest, fear seems to be an abundant desire for the world, particularly at this particular tome in history. This is a great heptametric poem in smooth quatrains, in aabb rhyme, language rich and an outstandingly we written post, well done, good luck, Roy
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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A fine entry in this personification of emotion contest, fear seems to be an abundant desire for the world, particularly at this particular tome in history. This is a great heptametric poem in smooth quatrains, in aabb rhyme, language rich and an outstandingly we written post, well done, good luck, Roy
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, it's very appreciated. :)
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Welcome
Comment from zanya
Frederick Fear is a guy we all meet somewhere along life's path - well documented here in this Personification Poem - the impact that fear has on us and how he simply never runs out of places to 'ply his wares'
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Frederick Fear is a guy we all meet somewhere along life's path - well documented here in this Personification Poem - the impact that fear has on us and how he simply never runs out of places to 'ply his wares'
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this fantastic review, I'm so honored. I'm very glad you liked it. :)
