Pistol Packin' Petticoat
A prequel to Tin Stars and Yankee Gold31 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Needs a little work to get another star.
I didn't see why you made a deal about the Walker Colt with no following use of it.
"How about a dollar a day and room and board, Sarah here is a fair to middlin' cook? - need to close the quote
But when the fell out from bottom ... - huh?
independent streak in her.She much preferred - space
Granny had maade her - made
The Elmer was in shock - The Elmer?
and I'll part ways with you.? - no question mark
we're burnin' daylight" - needs a period
Best wishes
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Needs a little work to get another star.
I didn't see why you made a deal about the Walker Colt with no following use of it.
"How about a dollar a day and room and board, Sarah here is a fair to middlin' cook? - need to close the quote
But when the fell out from bottom ... - huh?
independent streak in her.She much preferred - space
Granny had maade her - made
The Elmer was in shock - The Elmer?
and I'll part ways with you.? - no question mark
we're burnin' daylight" - needs a period
Best wishes
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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I went through and fixed the errors you pointed out, Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story..
