God On Dell
God orders a gift of rebirth40 total reviews
Comment from webfoot
what, you wrote 114 books? I thought i was prolific. good for you, keep writing.
I think i'm stopping at 20 :)
I like spiritual fiction too, good job Alcreator
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what, you wrote 114 books? I thought i was prolific. good for you, keep writing.
I think i'm stopping at 20 :)
I like spiritual fiction too, good job Alcreator
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
Comment from Patty Palmer
Sorry that I'm so late reviewing your entry. The contest was already over, but I still like to read the entries. You did a good job on your story using the words they wanted everyone to use. Your story makes sense and easy to read.
Patty
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Sorry that I'm so late reviewing your entry. The contest was already over, but I still like to read the entries. You did a good job on your story using the words they wanted everyone to use. Your story makes sense and easy to read.
Patty
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
Good spiritual fictional poem. Great entry for the contest. You appear to have met the requirements of: Three sentences, Twenty-one words and the three precise words mentioned to be included. Artwork well supports the topic in which it includes angels and the stairway that leads to heaven where God is beyond the bright light that is reflected at the top and an image of a person stand at the bottom. This all is in line with spiritual beliefs and your fictional indication that Dell died of Corona this morning. ( Which sadly may not have been fictional for someone.) The only hope and comfort for those left behind who are 'Believers' is the promise of everlasting life meeting again in Heaven. All the best.
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Good spiritual fictional poem. Great entry for the contest. You appear to have met the requirements of: Three sentences, Twenty-one words and the three precise words mentioned to be included. Artwork well supports the topic in which it includes angels and the stairway that leads to heaven where God is beyond the bright light that is reflected at the top and an image of a person stand at the bottom. This all is in line with spiritual beliefs and your fictional indication that Dell died of Corona this morning. ( Which sadly may not have been fictional for someone.) The only hope and comfort for those left behind who are 'Believers' is the promise of everlasting life meeting again in Heaven. All the best.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Wow, that is a very heartfelt poem and so relevant in the time and era of which we live. I found your poem to be very inspiring, thought provoking and a heart thumper. Thanks for sharing.
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Wow, that is a very heartfelt poem and so relevant in the time and era of which we live. I found your poem to be very inspiring, thought provoking and a heart thumper. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I am not sure God recycles us like plastic bottles, however I have to think that this short poem would give someone a smile if they know someone who died from the virus. Well done in using the words to create this shot poem.
My very best regards
Mary
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I am not sure God recycles us like plastic bottles, however I have to think that this short poem would give someone a smile if they know someone who died from the virus. Well done in using the words to create this shot poem.
My very best regards
Mary
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Now, that was a spectacular poem!!! Definitely on
fire!!! For, the creativity that made this poem flow
all the way through the souls of it's reader, is the
reason, your skills are amazing. Nice Job. Keep Writing.
And don't forget to stop by to talk to me. Stay Connected
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Now, that was a spectacular poem!!! Definitely on
fire!!! For, the creativity that made this poem flow
all the way through the souls of it's reader, is the
reason, your skills are amazing. Nice Job. Keep Writing.
And don't forget to stop by to talk to me. Stay Connected
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from Melbelles
I'm so sorry for your loss. May Dell have the grandest greetings from angels on high. Great job for using all 21 words and three sentences only. I sent a prayer your way. Lots of love.
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I'm so sorry for your loss. May Dell have the grandest greetings from angels on high. Great job for using all 21 words and three sentences only. I sent a prayer your way. Lots of love.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is beautiful! In the midst of the virus, we have lost so many. We still continue to lose. It is warming to know there is a place for them until their rebirth.
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This is beautiful! In the midst of the virus, we have lost so many. We still continue to lose. It is warming to know there is a place for them until their rebirth.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from BethShelby
I'm not so sure God recycles people. but if you were creating a flash ficion story to use the three words in red, you did a good job. It is nice to believe we Heaven awaited Dell and i would prefer to think he was gifted with a rebirth into the Kingdom of God. Not many would want to come back and start over as babe.
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I'm not so sure God recycles people. but if you were creating a flash ficion story to use the three words in red, you did a good job. It is nice to believe we Heaven awaited Dell and i would prefer to think he was gifted with a rebirth into the Kingdom of God. Not many would want to come back and start over as babe.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from Ethan Vandervelden
I don't usually comment on poems with any current events but this one was interesting to me. You had a difficult prompt to follow and I think you pretty much nailed it. The concept was good, and the thought put into it shows well between the lines. Well done!
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I don't usually comment on poems with any current events but this one was interesting to me. You had a difficult prompt to follow and I think you pretty much nailed it. The concept was good, and the thought put into it shows well between the lines. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022