Contest 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "God Commands The Sea"Stories, poems, flashes
17 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very nice entry for the contest. Sorry, I'm behind on reviewing as well. I see that you won this contest. Congratultions! If the voting wasn't already over, I would have voted for your entry.
Pattu
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Very nice entry for the contest. Sorry, I'm behind on reviewing as well. I see that you won this contest. Congratultions! If the voting wasn't already over, I would have voted for your entry.
Pattu
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much! Have a great day!
Comment from Sally Law
I don't understand the first part of this flash, but the other paragraphs, I do. Lucifer doesn't [command] a thing, not yet, anyway. He will receive authority for a time as described in the books of Daniel and Revelation, seven years to be exact.
Satan tempted the son of God to kneel before him and offered Jesus the kingdoms of the world. Jesus quoted the written word, then rebuked him. If we say yes to the devil and serve him willingly, he has the power to control us because we gave it to him. Maybe that is what you were referring to here in the context of sinners.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I don't understand the first part of this flash, but the other paragraphs, I do. Lucifer doesn't [command] a thing, not yet, anyway. He will receive authority for a time as described in the books of Daniel and Revelation, seven years to be exact.
Satan tempted the son of God to kneel before him and offered Jesus the kingdoms of the world. Jesus quoted the written word, then rebuked him. If we say yes to the devil and serve him willingly, he has the power to control us because we gave it to him. Maybe that is what you were referring to here in the context of sinners.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a lovely spiritual poem. I don't know where you find your artwork, but this is beautiful and perfect for your writing. I see this is an entry in a contest so I wish you all the luck in the world.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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This is a lovely spiritual poem. I don't know where you find your artwork, but this is beautiful and perfect for your writing. I see this is an entry in a contest so I wish you all the luck in the world.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I always told people that one of these days I was going to walk on water. And after damn near 70 years, I'm still spitting and sputtering. So now, I'll just praise the Lord and be thankful! Thanks for sharing. :-)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I always told people that one of these days I was going to walk on water. And after damn near 70 years, I'm still spitting and sputtering. So now, I'll just praise the Lord and be thankful! Thanks for sharing. :-)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol
Comment from eliz100
You have met the requirements for this contest. I wonder if it was hard for you, with so few words? The picture is a perfect fit with your words. I see no room for improvement.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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You have met the requirements for this contest. I wonder if it was hard for you, with so few words? The picture is a perfect fit with your words. I see no room for improvement.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol
Comment from lancellot
Very interesting. Did Moses do the parting or God do it. In a way I guess God used Moses to help his chosen people. So Moses is an interesting character. I like what you have here, and it contrast nicely with
known ending.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Very interesting. Did Moses do the parting or God do it. In a way I guess God used Moses to help his chosen people. So Moses is an interesting character. I like what you have here, and it contrast nicely with
known ending.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I do understand how Lucifer takes charge of many, but he can't with those faithful to God. I enjoyed reading. Continuing to pray.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I do understand how Lucifer takes charge of many, but he can't with those faithful to God. I enjoyed reading. Continuing to pray.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Begin Again, I hope this review finds you well. Conveying a message in 21 words is quite the challenge. I think you executed well. Good job. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Hello Begin Again, I hope this review finds you well. Conveying a message in 21 words is quite the challenge. I think you executed well. Good job. Have a great day!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol
Comment from dmt1967
I like the picture and the words suit the little story very well. This is a good entry to the contest and it should be in with a chance. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. Take care.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I like the picture and the words suit the little story very well. This is a good entry to the contest and it should be in with a chance. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. Take care.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, It's not easy to write na story about faith in just twenty-one words, but you have done very well. I wish you the very best in the contest. Hugs, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Hi Carol, It's not easy to write na story about faith in just twenty-one words, but you have done very well. I wish you the very best in the contest. Hugs, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am getting slower by the second and every time I think I have a handle on being polite and telling everyone how much their efforts and words mean to me (truly mean to me) I discover I have just fallen further behind. I appreciate that people actually enjoy what spills from my aging brain and couldn't find more happiness than sharing my writing. I thank you for your time and thoughts.
Sending a basket of smiles and hugs and apologies... especially to those I've left waiting for days.
HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND!
May cupid sprinkle you with much joy!
Always, Carol