Nick is Next
a 21-word spiritual story19 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Amen! When our time comes to meet the Lord, I can't imagine anything greater. All our pain, sorrow, and grief will be lifted from our shoulders and replaced with an everlasting love.
Always, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Amen! When our time comes to meet the Lord, I can't imagine anything greater. All our pain, sorrow, and grief will be lifted from our shoulders and replaced with an everlasting love.
Always, Carol
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Carol, for giving this a look.
Comment from Versch
This is a perfect Writing Prompt entry. The message is clear, Nick's time has come at last. It would indeed be a nice change for anyone going in heaven. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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This is a perfect Writing Prompt entry. The message is clear, Nick's time has come at last. It would indeed be a nice change for anyone going in heaven. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Versch
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, indeed! What a lovely write. So short, but so powerful and meaningful. You have met the requirements admirably, so I hope your entry does well in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Yes, indeed! What a lovely write. So short, but so powerful and meaningful. You have met the requirements admirably, so I hope your entry does well in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Don yourself in the armor of the Lord and you will accomplish great things. Just ask a marine, who seem to me, to be the bravest, tallest, most ferocious combatant on the face of the earth.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Don yourself in the armor of the Lord and you will accomplish great things. Just ask a marine, who seem to me, to be the bravest, tallest, most ferocious combatant on the face of the earth.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Tom, for giving this a look.
Comment from Susan Newell
I always have a hard time reviewing short shorts. This is one of the best I've read in that it succinctly delivers a complete story and doesn't overdo the faith aspect. Very nice.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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I always have a hard time reviewing short shorts. This is one of the best I've read in that it succinctly delivers a complete story and doesn't overdo the faith aspect. Very nice.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Susan
Comment from juliaSjames
At one level this is a story of an old man going to receive his heavenly reward after suffering in his last days on earth. Now why do I think you picked that name Nick on purpose to give an added dimension? Or is it just my suspicious mind?
Good luck in the prompt
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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At one level this is a story of an old man going to receive his heavenly reward after suffering in his last days on earth. Now why do I think you picked that name Nick on purpose to give an added dimension? Or is it just my suspicious mind?
Good luck in the prompt
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Nick was random, but the name made for a good title.
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Okay I was overthinking this knowing your tongue in cheek humor
Comment from nomi338
Uhm, not. Not so fast young man. Heaven is not a place of leisure. The Book of Ezekiel and some others show heaven to be a place inhabited by powerful, invisible spirit creatures, who are busy working. Jesus famously said of his father that he continues working and likewise he continues working. So, if you want to got to heaven to rest and relax, you might want to reconsider your intended location.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Uhm, not. Not so fast young man. Heaven is not a place of leisure. The Book of Ezekiel and some others show heaven to be a place inhabited by powerful, invisible spirit creatures, who are busy working. Jesus famously said of his father that he continues working and likewise he continues working. So, if you want to got to heaven to rest and relax, you might want to reconsider your intended location.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Better to stay alive then.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When it's time to die, we welcome the rest and I remember my Grandma when she was in hospital and she begged us all to let her go and have some peace, it was difficult to see her die, a fine spiritual write Bill, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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When it's time to die, we welcome the rest and I remember my Grandma when she was in hospital and she begged us all to let her go and have some peace, it was difficult to see her die, a fine spiritual write Bill, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very beautifully written. It word be comforting words to those who are sitting beside the bedside of a loved ill and in pain.
Good job.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Very beautifully written. It word be comforting words to those who are sitting beside the bedside of a loved ill and in pain.
Good job.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Mary
Comment from lyenochka
Nice way to use those three required words in the 21-word story to focus on the transition from this world to the next. I like the peaceful response of realizing that Heaven will be a nice change. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Nice way to use those three required words in the 21-word story to focus on the transition from this world to the next. I like the peaceful response of realizing that Heaven will be a nice change. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Helen.
