Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi I certainly will take the advice. There is always something beautiful in someone. We need to bring it out. Straightforward and clear, the write tell what it was intended to.
God bless
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Hi I certainly will take the advice. There is always something beautiful in someone. We need to bring it out. Straightforward and clear, the write tell what it was intended to.
God bless
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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My sincere thank you! Blessings always back to you!
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
The message is that we should not squander our skillful talent. We should use our innate talent and write. So, resume, you must with pen and ink.
But, tune to your inner voice, don't overthink. Thanks for sharing, Kit
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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The message is that we should not squander our skillful talent. We should use our innate talent and write. So, resume, you must with pen and ink.
But, tune to your inner voice, don't overthink. Thanks for sharing, Kit
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Hi Kit, thanks for your review.
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You are welcome
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello JLR a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your latest poetic offering, very beautiful and wise words. Thanks for sharing. Good job and have a great day.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Hello JLR a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your latest poetic offering, very beautiful and wise words. Thanks for sharing. Good job and have a great day.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Happy day back to you! Jim
Comment from dmt1967
This poem paints a picture of a writer working. I think it describes the art of writing perfectly. We paint a picture, then we mold it into a story, and finally we chip away at it until all the story is finished. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.
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This poem paints a picture of a writer working. I think it describes the art of writing perfectly. We paint a picture, then we mold it into a story, and finally we chip away at it until all the story is finished. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Sally Law
Marvelous teaching tool with heart. I have been working in my own descriptionari for over a year. I love words, and to use the right one in my writing is a delight. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for a hour writing endeavors,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Marvelous teaching tool with heart. I have been working in my own descriptionari for over a year. I love words, and to use the right one in my writing is a delight. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for a hour writing endeavors,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Smiles back to your friend, I trust you are doing well?.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Metaphorically speaking this writing is uniquely well done though I did not overly favor lines1 + 2 and 13 + 14 which read, for me, disjointedly. "then bethink??? The larger problems are 2 and 14. Lines one and 13 flow but their mates... I don't know.
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Metaphorically speaking this writing is uniquely well done though I did not overly favor lines1 + 2 and 13 + 14 which read, for me, disjointedly. "then bethink??? The larger problems are 2 and 14. Lines one and 13 flow but their mates... I don't know.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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I appreciate your critique.
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ur welkum
Comment from Kayte Ray
This is well written
I like the flow and the rhythm. It is very easy to read and enjoy. I appreciate the discussion of the writing style involved as well. I may suggest a larger font use to ease reading but other than that this is wonderful. Nicely done
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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This is well written
I like the flow and the rhythm. It is very easy to read and enjoy. I appreciate the discussion of the writing style involved as well. I may suggest a larger font use to ease reading but other than that this is wonderful. Nicely done
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from MissMerri
There is a wise message here for those who love words and seek to create art using language instead of canvas or stone. It's is good to consider the desired outcome before beginning. But those who must write... simply must. Great poem, expressive and original. I enjoyed it.
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There is a wise message here for those who love words and seek to create art using language instead of canvas or stone. It's is good to consider the desired outcome before beginning. But those who must write... simply must. Great poem, expressive and original. I enjoyed it.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Smiling back with dear thanks.
Comment from Earl Corp
I liked this a lot. It rhymed, made sense, and told of the process we go through to put pen to paper. It should have been a contest entry. Very nice job.
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I liked this a lot. It rhymed, made sense, and told of the process we go through to put pen to paper. It should have been a contest entry. Very nice job.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you Earl, this means a lot to me!
