Happy Hour
High On...7 total reviews
Comment from WriterHeather
This is funny. I like it. Cool! lol. Poor little bumblebee is gonna be so sad when he doesn't get knighted. hahaha. I hope he doesn't become an alcoholic. This story could become dark so fast. Good luck in the contest! You made me smile with this one!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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This is funny. I like it. Cool! lol. Poor little bumblebee is gonna be so sad when he doesn't get knighted. hahaha. I hope he doesn't become an alcoholic. This story could become dark so fast. Good luck in the contest! You made me smile with this one!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you, what a lovely review....it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from robyn corum
BN,
I am not sure i have seen any other tipsy bee entries. But then, if other writers saw your piece i would not blame them for holding back. Ha!
The cute story, mistaken identification, internal rhyming, and other clever ingredients combine to make a fun read.
Thank you and good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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BN,
I am not sure i have seen any other tipsy bee entries. But then, if other writers saw your piece i would not blame them for holding back. Ha!
The cute story, mistaken identification, internal rhyming, and other clever ingredients combine to make a fun read.
Thank you and good luck!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and for your kind words. :)
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Hi,
Your poem's rhyme is smooth, and I can imagine your work here turned into a song. I really love your sweet, unique take on the Bee.
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Hi,
Your poem's rhyme is smooth, and I can imagine your work here turned into a song. I really love your sweet, unique take on the Bee.
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this nice review, I'm glad you like my poem. :)
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You?re Welcome.😊
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Hey I love the picture love the words went together best of luck in the competition thank you for sharing this telephone and creative peace Have a beautiful day in state bless
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Hey I love the picture love the words went together best of luck in the competition thank you for sharing this telephone and creative peace Have a beautiful day in state bless
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you, that's very kind of you to say. You have a beautiful day as well. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this and a great entry for the contest. Just imagine how this must look: "For now, though, he did somersaults, and flew so wild and free." Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Well done on this and a great entry for the contest. Just imagine how this must look: "For now, though, he did somersaults, and flew so wild and free." Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate this nice review. :)
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You are welcome
Comment from Susan Newell
As always, you have woven a delightful tale into skillfully strung words and rhymes. I really like the idea of getting the buzz from a cocktail. Particularly great was the anticipation of being knighted by the queen. This is a great entry.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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As always, you have woven a delightful tale into skillfully strung words and rhymes. I really like the idea of getting the buzz from a cocktail. Particularly great was the anticipation of being knighted by the queen. This is a great entry.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much for such a terrific review, I really appreciate it. :)
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You are welcome. You never disappoint.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great response to the writing prompt. A very funny poem. The tipsy bumblebee. I love it. I hope everything is going well with you. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Great response to the writing prompt. A very funny poem. The tipsy bumblebee. I love it. I hope everything is going well with you. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this great review, so glad you took the time to read my poem. :)
