Women: The Pentultimate Trap
Another Fractured Fairy Tale by Yours Truly6 total reviews
Comment from AliMom
Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha. This is hilarious. I like your rhyme scheme and you play on words. I particularly like uncoincidentally, lazy, crazy, incidentally, and the need for couture because of his amorous affections. A very teasing, funny, poem indeed. Thanks for the fun. Congratulations on your win.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha. This is hilarious. I like your rhyme scheme and you play on words. I particularly like uncoincidentally, lazy, crazy, incidentally, and the need for couture because of his amorous affections. A very teasing, funny, poem indeed. Thanks for the fun. Congratulations on your win.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Say it is, Joe. I appreciate your comment and support.
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Tom, you are truly a card
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Maybe a joker! or the one missing from the deck.
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See, that's what I mean. You're so funny.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery Poet a fantastic Friday to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Off the wall writing prompt entry, I think you executed it well. lol Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Hello mystery Poet a fantastic Friday to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Off the wall writing prompt entry, I think you executed it well. lol Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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appreciatively yours
Comment from Heather Burroughs
I can't really say I find anything humorous about your story but it read fluidly and was well written.
Thank you for sharing your work. Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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I can't really say I find anything humorous about your story but it read fluidly and was well written.
Thank you for sharing your work. Many blessings to you
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Another reviewer began as you, saying "I had no idea why this was so silly until I read what kind of contest this was written for. It was meant to be funny.
Comment from lancellot
You know I had no idea why this was so silly until I read what kind of contest this was written for. Okay, now I understand why and based on the rules of the contest, I have to say you did a really good job.
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You know I had no idea why this was so silly until I read what kind of contest this was written for. Okay, now I understand why and based on the rules of the contest, I have to say you did a really good job.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
I'm laughing, I'm laughing. It is very humorous and I really did get a chuckle out of the whole thing. I portrays a great truth too, that women are in charge. I love it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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I'm laughing, I'm laughing. It is very humorous and I really did get a chuckle out of the whole thing. I portrays a great truth too, that women are in charge. I love it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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and people use to think the Good Humor man had a gig.
Comment from Susan Newell
Well, I can at least say that it is cleverly written and humorous. I did think the last two lines were particularly funny. The key is to let the men think they are making the decisions, even though they are inherently reluctant to. Glad to read something that isn't gutted by political correctness.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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Well, I can at least say that it is cleverly written and humorous. I did think the last two lines were particularly funny. The key is to let the men think they are making the decisions, even though they are inherently reluctant to. Glad to read something that isn't gutted by political correctness.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2022
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I go awry once or twice a year, and as for politics tis better to stay mum unless you are in the majority that rules today, sadly.
