Death is Inevitable
Choosing right or reaping consequences7 total reviews
Comment from GWEnos
Yes, well, you do get verbose. And we do tend to get away with it most of the time. I shall be the one riding the black horse for this poem. This time!
I did like your haiku of Colombo as well.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Yes, well, you do get verbose. And we do tend to get away with it most of the time. I shall be the one riding the black horse for this poem. This time!
I did like your haiku of Colombo as well.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Be it as it may
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
This is beautifully written, I read every word and was fascinated. You write with a style that I don't see often. I LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!! I believed every word you put down absolutly marvelous.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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This is beautifully written, I read every word and was fascinated. You write with a style that I don't see often. I LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!! I believed every word you put down absolutly marvelous.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Maybe we are genetically related. My writing skills differ from many I read herein. :)
Comment from Earl Corp
You kind of ended your poem on a sour note. I would have thought a poem about silver linings would end on a positive. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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You kind of ended your poem on a sour note. I would have thought a poem about silver linings would end on a positive. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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thanks but there is a choice given eternal life with God or life eternal without. I thought of reversing the two and then thought the positive is there too.
Comment from Sally Law
Love your spiritual poem, mystery poet. According to the Bible, we will real what we have sown unless we take on the forgiveness of Christ, and believe and receive the gift of salvation. Only then is our name written in the Lamb's Book of Life. Our future relies on our decision to do this, as Jesus has done everything to save us. All we need is found in Him, in this world and the one to come.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Love your spiritual poem, mystery poet. According to the Bible, we will real what we have sown unless we take on the forgiveness of Christ, and believe and receive the gift of salvation. Only then is our name written in the Lamb's Book of Life. Our future relies on our decision to do this, as Jesus has done everything to save us. All we need is found in Him, in this world and the one to come.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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thanks
Comment from Versch
This is an excellent Silver Lining writing prompt entry. Whenever I read something glorifying God, it always touched me. The mention of death and eternal life either in heaven or hell make me think which place I would go to one day. I pray to God it will be in heaven. Blessings, Ver
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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This is an excellent Silver Lining writing prompt entry. Whenever I read something glorifying God, it always touched me. The mention of death and eternal life either in heaven or hell make me think which place I would go to one day. I pray to God it will be in heaven. Blessings, Ver
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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many forget what we have, even mortality ends with our final breath
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Your poem fits perfectly with the contest. I truly love the silver lining contest. It make you think about the best out of the worst. Great job. Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest.
Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Your poem fits perfectly with the contest. I truly love the silver lining contest. It make you think about the best out of the worst. Great job. Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest.
Many blessings to you
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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be well and prosper
Comment from lancellot
Well the contest asks for a poem of any type, and I think this would a form of free verse poetry. It does have silver lining, so I think you are okay there too. I wish you luck in the voting.
note:
The pair [rides] on and will not subside
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Well the contest asks for a poem of any type, and I think this would a form of free verse poetry. It does have silver lining, so I think you are okay there too. I wish you luck in the voting.
note:
The pair [rides] on and will not subside
-ride
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
