Butterflies
The flutter of love...26 total reviews
Comment from Kayte Ray
Nice job
congratulations on your contest win.
This is great
there is a full picture here that can be related to
this is a lot of fun
well written and enjoyable and the graphic is a perfect match
good presentation.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Nice job
congratulations on your contest win.
This is great
there is a full picture here that can be related to
this is a lot of fun
well written and enjoyable and the graphic is a perfect match
good presentation.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your appreciative review, which I in return appreciate greatly.
Comment from 1Dreamer
Congratulations on your win. Such a sweet poem. It captures the first time you realize you are in love. Speaking of love, I loved reading it and am so happy for your winning.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Congratulations on your win. Such a sweet poem. It captures the first time you realize you are in love. Speaking of love, I loved reading it and am so happy for your winning.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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What a lovely review!
Comment from Rena Smith
I love this poem because it's a simple poem about love. It's words are sweet. The poet did a great job with the choice of words and I love the two words at the ending- love's butterflies. That's cute. This poem is just vibrant and lively and I love the simplicity of it.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I love this poem because it's a simple poem about love. It's words are sweet. The poet did a great job with the choice of words and I love the two words at the ending- love's butterflies. That's cute. This poem is just vibrant and lively and I love the simplicity of it.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments, Rena... and that super rating!
Comment from dragonpoet
Lisa,
I like this isimple expression of love in this mono-rhyme poem about the first feelings of love inspried by a glance.
Congrats on winning the Valentine Poem contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Lisa,
I like this isimple expression of love in this mono-rhyme poem about the first feelings of love inspried by a glance.
Congrats on winning the Valentine Poem contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your lovely comments, Joan.
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No problem, Lisa.
Joan
Comment from Paul McFarland
Twenty syllables is the size. I can not tell you lies. Congratulations on your prize. Your rhyming's great in my eyes. The artwork I'll not criticize.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Twenty syllables is the size. I can not tell you lies. Congratulations on your prize. Your rhyming's great in my eyes. The artwork I'll not criticize.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your poetic review, Paul.
Comment from Contests
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
Comment from Michele Harber
What a sweet poem, and I like your monorhyme. The attached image is very pretty, and 100% apropos. Excellent use of your 20 syllables. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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What a sweet poem, and I like your monorhyme. The attached image is very pretty, and 100% apropos. Excellent use of your 20 syllables. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thanks Michele. I hope it isn't too cloying... syrup isn't good for us.
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What - you never heard of cough syrup? It?s good for you. And maple syrup is definitely good for my waffles.
I believe there?s an international law that says you?re allowed to be sappy on Valentine?s Day and wedding anniversaries.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
What a whimsical poem, I loved it! Your writing was light and airy just like a butterfly. My grandmother loved butterflies and since her passing every time I see one I think of her. Your poem made me think of her and smile, thanks for that.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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What a whimsical poem, I loved it! Your writing was light and airy just like a butterfly. My grandmother loved butterflies and since her passing every time I see one I think of her. Your poem made me think of her and smile, thanks for that.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thanks for reviewing. I'm pleased my story evoked good memories for you.
(I see you are new to FanStory. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your experience of writing, reviewing, and getting feedback.)
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I liked the creativity of this poem and the emotion, as well as the clever rhyme. "Love's butterflies is a delightful phrase. Your butterfly image is perfect for this sweet little poem. Good job!
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I liked the creativity of this poem and the emotion, as well as the clever rhyme. "Love's butterflies is a delightful phrase. Your butterfly image is perfect for this sweet little poem. Good job!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Internal rhyme as well as all the others. Great for such a short poem, which still has meaning and captures all those initial feelings and the dawning realisation that this could be ... love! Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Internal rhyme as well as all the others. Great for such a short poem, which still has meaning and captures all those initial feelings and the dawning realisation that this could be ... love! Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Short and sweet can be hard to pin down. Luckily no butterflies were harmed in the creation of my poem.
