Butterflies
The flutter of love...26 total reviews
Comment from karenina
The first thing that attracted me to my husband were his soulful eyes! Your poem made me reminisce and smile... A sweet confection of a poem! Butterfly heart!
--Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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The first thing that attracted me to my husband were his soulful eyes! Your poem made me reminisce and smile... A sweet confection of a poem! Butterfly heart!
--Karenina
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Oh yes, the eyes have it. There's no debate.
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Smile....
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Closely followed by a nice voice. I'm a sucker for imagining a lovely voice whispering sweet somethings in my ear.
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And a genuine laugh!
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Oh definitely... must have good sense of humour and be able to laugh at himself.
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Check! check! CHECK!
LOL....
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Could you write some more poppycock offerings for Lyenochka's book please please pretty please?
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Ha-ha. I was talking to my daughter on the phone... Dropped that little "brand" on her and she could not stop laughing! She told me tonight she told everyone at work! Hmmm. I'll put my thinking cap on....
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It's nice to share laughter.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem is excellent in every respect--romantic and appealing, with creative rhyming of five words. The artwork is lovely and fitting.
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Your ultra-concise poem is excellent in every respect--romantic and appealing, with creative rhyming of five words. The artwork is lovely and fitting.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Lisa.
-I like your poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-It has a nice lilt to it, and celebrates love
and Valentine's Day very well.
-Hope you have a special one,
and do well in the contest, too.
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Lisa.
-I like your poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-It has a nice lilt to it, and celebrates love
and Valentine's Day very well.
-Hope you have a special one,
and do well in the contest, too.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Lisa, your valentine is sweet. I especially liked:
I've got love's butterflies.
(That's when you know Cupid has struck)
Your poem reads and flows well and has good rhyming within.
Well chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
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Hello Lisa, your valentine is sweet. I especially liked:
I've got love's butterflies.
(That's when you know Cupid has struck)
Your poem reads and flows well and has good rhyming within.
Well chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written valentine poem. Your photo of the butterflies compliments your words well. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a beautifully written valentine poem. Your photo of the butterflies compliments your words well. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from juliaSjames
Enchanting poem LisaMay
It captures the feeling of love at any age.
There's a spark that flares when two people are on the same wavelength. Magical.
The monorhyme enhances the drama of the write.
Best of luck in the contest, my friend
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
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Enchanting poem LisaMay
It captures the feeling of love at any age.
There's a spark that flares when two people are on the same wavelength. Magical.
The monorhyme enhances the drama of the write.
Best of luck in the contest, my friend
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Nicely done with the multiple internal rhymes! In this brief poem, you have skillfully described that feeling of "love at first sight" with the connection of seeing and feeling. Best wishes in the contest!
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Nicely done with the multiple internal rhymes! In this brief poem, you have skillfully described that feeling of "love at first sight" with the connection of seeing and feeling. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from royowen
I can vaguely remember those selfsame butterflies all those years ago in my youth, but when God appeared in my life, those same butterflies reappeared, but many times purer and much more intense, I realised that was a touch of Heaven to look forward to. Beautifully written Lisa, good luck, blessings Roy
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I can vaguely remember those selfsame butterflies all those years ago in my youth, but when God appeared in my life, those same butterflies reappeared, but many times purer and much more intense, I realised that was a touch of Heaven to look forward to. Beautifully written Lisa, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
As my name suggests, I love butterflies and had to comment. What a beautiful picture for a very imaginative four line poem with all end rhymes and a cute message of love. Best wishes in the contest.
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As my name suggests, I love butterflies and had to comment. What a beautiful picture for a very imaginative four line poem with all end rhymes and a cute message of love. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your Valentine offering here for the contest Lisa as we often have butterflies when we are in love and we are hypnotised by someone we are attracted to, much w enjoyed, love Dolly x
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I enjoyed your Valentine offering here for the contest Lisa as we often have butterflies when we are in love and we are hypnotised by someone we are attracted to, much w enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
