Butterflies
The flutter of love...26 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I love this Valentine's poem.
It is so sweet and it speaks of a young first love of feeling butterflies when in love.
Good luck in the contest
Best wishes
Mary
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I love this Valentine's poem.
It is so sweet and it speaks of a young first love of feeling butterflies when in love.
Good luck in the contest
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from Earl Corp
Isn't it spelled hypnotize? I wish I had a six star rating to give you. Anyone who can make all three lines of a short poem rhyme and make sense deserves it. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Isn't it spelled hypnotize? I wish I had a six star rating to give you. Anyone who can make all three lines of a short poem rhyme and make sense deserves it. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your nice comments. The spelling is a regional thing - I live in New Zealand where we always spell words like that with an 's' . Spelling it with a 'z' in the American way. (We also call 'z' zed not zee.)
Comment from robyn corum
LisaMay,
Cutest entry I've seen yet! You have the required syllable count and you certainly create smiles in the heart. *smile* (<-- see?) The presence of the repeating rhyme scheme was icing!
I enjoyed this offering and expect it to do well.
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LisaMay,
Cutest entry I've seen yet! You have the required syllable count and you certainly create smiles in the heart. *smile* (<-- see?) The presence of the repeating rhyme scheme was icing!
I enjoyed this offering and expect it to do well.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from RodG
With Valentine's Day soon arriving, I can imagine there are many young people everywhere feeling "love's butterflies" for the first time. Your poem brings back fond memories, Lisa. Good use of rhyme in every line. Rod
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With Valentine's Day soon arriving, I can imagine there are many young people everywhere feeling "love's butterflies" for the first time. Your poem brings back fond memories, Lisa. Good use of rhyme in every line. Rod
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from jaded831
You describe being in love beautifully. Those butterflies for me come also when winter turns to spring. It is a giddy feeling, makes you happy to be alive. Great entry for the valentines contest.
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You describe being in love beautifully. Those butterflies for me come also when winter turns to spring. It is a giddy feeling, makes you happy to be alive. Great entry for the valentines contest.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Lisamay a fantastic friday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Valentine Poem contest entry, you executed it well and I liked the message. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello Lisamay a fantastic friday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Valentine Poem contest entry, you executed it well and I liked the message. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
