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Comment from Theodore McDowell
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You are such a soft romantic at heart. Reading this one was like sitting next to a fire burning in a fireplace and dreaming about a past beloved. Well-written of course. Have you published any of your work?

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    No, but it is a dream. While I cared for my husband and parents for ten years I lost track of "me" and my passion for writing. I promised my Mom and my husband I would return to it. I do hope to at least self-publish before my time passes. I am thrilled you thought of the story in this way because that's exactly as I felt too.

    Hugs, Carol
reply by Theodore McDowell on 12-Feb-2022
    You definitely should publish. I have a second book of poems coming out in three months. I'll keep you posted!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    Good for you! I know most of your readers will be "smarter" than me and they should enjoy every word on the page. i wish you luck!

    Smiles, Carol