In God's Eyes
Winning the race13 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
To write a complete story in so few words is a challenge that you have executed well. You've included narrative and dialogue and have an inspiring and happy ending. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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To write a complete story in so few words is a challenge that you have executed well. You've included narrative and dialogue and have an inspiring and happy ending. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much! Have a great day!
Comment from lancellot
Well, I guess in some strange sort of way going to Heaven and being with God is a win. One can hardly argue with that reward. This is an interesting and well crafted story. The ending was flash fiction worthy and unexpected.
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Well, I guess in some strange sort of way going to Heaven and being with God is a win. One can hardly argue with that reward. This is an interesting and well crafted story. The ending was flash fiction worthy and unexpected.
Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much! Have a great day!
Comment from Hawk37
God sends Devon back as Michael Phelps as his father to get some swimming lessons.
Very well written story in 60 words of someone pushed to the point of there own detriment.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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God sends Devon back as Michael Phelps as his father to get some swimming lessons.
Very well written story in 60 words of someone pushed to the point of there own detriment.
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much! Have a great day!
