Amidst the Shells
a 60 word story11 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent short story for the contest
with a good message to adults and children alike.
The picture is sadly reflective of the problems
that are running wild in our society.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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This is an excellent short story for the contest
with a good message to adults and children alike.
The picture is sadly reflective of the problems
that are running wild in our society.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, Robert, for taking the time to read and appraise my story. Indeed, the problem of bullying is rampant in our schoolyards even today.
