Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a wonderful Tanka poem. The picture was interesting and your words were delightful because they showed the heat of the passion. I thought it was great. Blessed be n hugs!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022

Thank you very much, Aryr. You're one of the best reviewers in fanstory. Helen is too. I appreciate that you review all my work. It's very nice of you. I wish I could promote more but I watch my grandson and he is a handful LoL he is going through a rough patch lately, throwing tantrums and hitting. I have to remind myself he is only four. (((Sigh)))

Blessed be, my friend.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 14-Feb-2022

Oh my goodness, a four year old, that is amazing. I remember when raising my son, that several people told me that it was either the forgetful fours when they forgot everything from day to day or the fighting fours where they fought all the time. I see you have a fighting four. Take care of that little guy, one day he will grow up. Gypsy you are so very welcome. Blessed be n hugs! Yes, I know Helen very well.

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy, and longing desire is a flame that I tried to stand my ground against, bu I turned and fled. Now I distract myself with other worries that I can't control!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022

Thank you very much for your review and feedback, Mike.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

Interesting poem- 5/75/7/7 count good- content -pyrotechnically, anything beyond a 'yearning' might be ill advised. Poem does a good job describing (probably) a young person with a good fantasy and above average physical desires? As in the picture.
Good job.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022

Thank you very much, AP. You are a wonderful reviewer.

Gypsy hugs

reply by AP Apgar on 13-Feb-2022

Bless you ❤️

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I like your love and passion orientated Tanka that with ten minutes to go before valentine's day here is an exceedingly apt subject. I don't feel myself to be familiar enough with this poetry form to go around handing out six star ratings. Sorry if you feel that's a bit unfair. Kate xx

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022

Not at all, I don't expect six stars, they are a treat.

Thank you very much, Katherine. You are very kind. I appreciate your time and review. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well, this certainly is a sultry one. I wonder why the moon is "dark" and it seems only to shine a "slit" through the dusk. But the passion seems to be quite on fire!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022

The lover is gone making her sad.

Thank you very much, Helen. You are very kind. I appreciate your time and review. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs