Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Offering"
This is a 5-7-5 Backwards Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022

Thanks, Dr. R

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 backwards contest.
The syllables are in check and the content tells of a sad situation.
I like that fruit can be taken literally or metaphorically. Good job.
Best of luck in the competition.

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 Comment Written 15-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022

Thank you, DD

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

That's one ugly piece of fruit, what happens when no one is willing to enjoy you when fresh and young. That's worse than being last to be picked for a team. Best of luck with this.

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 Comment Written 14-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022

Thanks, Carol