My Son, My Angel
My angel gave me something to care for49 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Presence of Love!"
(4 Your Eyes Only)
By Doctor Ricky 1024
The Present from Roy was a Presence of His Endearing Love.
Son to Mother, a Message to Live!
Live for Me!
Live for this Beautiful Present.
A Presence from God!
Through Roy to Bring you back, back to Reality!
Your Beautiful Roy!.
And, My Beautiful Jay!
What more can we say?
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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"The Presence of Love!"
(4 Your Eyes Only)
By Doctor Ricky 1024
The Present from Roy was a Presence of His Endearing Love.
Son to Mother, a Message to Live!
Live for Me!
Live for this Beautiful Present.
A Presence from God!
Through Roy to Bring you back, back to Reality!
Your Beautiful Roy!.
And, My Beautiful Jay!
What more can we say?
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you. I sent a reply through messages. The cat has long since returned to my son, but she accomplished her purpose.
Hugs
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I know.
Be safe.
I'll say a prayer.
Ricky
Comment from writer723
This story is very heart-warming and lovely. You described the scenario well where an angel is believed to have intervened in someone's life. I think angels are among us and that they do rescue us sometimes. Your writing illustrates this idea very well. Nice job!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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This story is very heart-warming and lovely. You described the scenario well where an angel is believed to have intervened in someone's life. I think angels are among us and that they do rescue us sometimes. Your writing illustrates this idea very well. Nice job!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you, and thanks for the six stars, they are appreciated. This is a true story that happened around 1985. Hugs.
Comment from Cathy M
I am so sorry for a loss that can never be repaired. You capture the moments of your thoughts so eloquently. I heard the rustling of the tree and the faint mewing. That moment of realization is all written with heart and depth.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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I am so sorry for a loss that can never be repaired. You capture the moments of your thoughts so eloquently. I heard the rustling of the tree and the faint mewing. That moment of realization is all written with heart and depth.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thank you. This story is true. It has always amazed me that a tiny kitten was in that exact spot at that precise time. I would not be writing this but for that kitten. It had to be a message from an angel. Thank you for the six stars. I appreciate them. Hugs to you.
Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully told! I remember years ago that you wrote about your son's accident but this is the first I read about the suicide attempt thwarted by God and your son and the kitten. Congratulations on the well deserved win!!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Beautifully told! I remember years ago that you wrote about your son's accident but this is the first I read about the suicide attempt thwarted by God and your son and the kitten. Congratulations on the well deserved win!!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you. It took me a long time to get courage enough to tell people about the suicide attempt. The odds of a kitten being in that spot at that precise time always seemed like some kind of divine intervention. Also, I can't describe the strange feeling of a presence.
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And you can write it again someday but in third person and keep coming up with new ways to describe that Presence.
Comment from LisaMay
Oh my gosh, my heart goes out to you for the terrible time you've had to live through as a mother. But the big point of your story is this: you DID live through it. Roy's angel knew you were needed as an important mother-figure elsewhere. Very well written - emotional without being cloying.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Oh my gosh, my heart goes out to you for the terrible time you've had to live through as a mother. But the big point of your story is this: you DID live through it. Roy's angel knew you were needed as an important mother-figure elsewhere. Very well written - emotional without being cloying.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you. It was a tough time but it was many years ago and I have learned to live with it. The kitten lived to be over twenty. The odds of a tiny kitten being in that place at that precise time defies logic. I have thought about that a lot over the years.
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A deeply symbolic encounter with the kitten. Magical assistance to stay alive.
Comment from Dawn Munro
"...died a couple of years (before)..."
The above is the only suggestion I can make for this sublime, uplifting tale. (And I'm not even sure that it's an improvement *smile*)
it is wonderfully penned, and I couldn't read it fast enough, once I began! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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"...died a couple of years (before)..."
The above is the only suggestion I can make for this sublime, uplifting tale. (And I'm not even sure that it's an improvement *smile*)
it is wonderfully penned, and I couldn't read it fast enough, once I began! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading and the six stars. I will check out your suggestion and see how it sounds. The kittten was with me for over twenty years. The odds of a tiny kitten being in that place at that precise time are remote. She must have been sent by an angel.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
A very moving and believable narrative.
I, too, have had experiences in my life when a higher source saved me/intervened/ allowed me to continue for one more day. Incredibly grateful...
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Hello Mystery Writer,
A very moving and believable narrative.
I, too, have had experiences in my life when a higher source saved me/intervened/ allowed me to continue for one more day. Incredibly grateful...
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. The odds of a kitten so small being in that place at that precise time was remote. She must have been sent by an angel.
Comment from Cecilia R
Beautiful story! I liked your opening and how it created an expectation.
My suggestion is to use less 'I did' and expand your feelings during the experience.
Your description of the setting was complete enough that I could picture it as I read. The ending brought good closure to the story
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Beautiful story! I liked your opening and how it created an expectation.
My suggestion is to use less 'I did' and expand your feelings during the experience.
Your description of the setting was complete enough that I could picture it as I read. The ending brought good closure to the story
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. What were the odds of such a tiny kitten being in that prcise area at that exact time? I have thought about it a lot over the years. The kitten lived with me for over twenty years.
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How wonderful. Sounds like someone was looking out for you.
Comment from Lisa Tepp
Oh my, what a story with a very awesome conclusion. There is NO way that kitten could have been out there on it's own--your son sent it. Such a sad story but with an ending full of wonder. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Oh my, what a story with a very awesome conclusion. There is NO way that kitten could have been out there on it's own--your son sent it. Such a sad story but with an ending full of wonder. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank you. I agree. I always thought it odd that the kitten would have been in that exact spot at that precise time. She lived with me for over twenty years.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
OKI was intrigued keep it up stay writing I enjoyed it from beginning to begin to me it was captivating keep up the good work I wish you well have a beautiful and blessed day
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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OKI was intrigued keep it up stay writing I enjoyed it from beginning to begin to me it was captivating keep up the good work I wish you well have a beautiful and blessed day
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It wasn't hard to write because it was a memory more than a story.
