Life Journey With Her Paintbrush
Self discovery through creativity. (148 words)9 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Dear author,
Your personification in this poem is outstanding. I'm sorry I do not have any 6's left.
It's sensual, yet innocent message gives your paintbrush character and life.
Good luck in the contest with this exceptional work.
Cindy
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Dear author,
Your personification in this poem is outstanding. I'm sorry I do not have any 6's left.
It's sensual, yet innocent message gives your paintbrush character and life.
Good luck in the contest with this exceptional work.
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Did you write this one night in bed? Many words penned are similes and subliminally suggestive. Good luck......................................................................
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Did you write this one night in bed? Many words penned are similes and subliminally suggestive. Good luck......................................................................
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I don't need to be in bed to think up innuendo!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I really enjoyed reading your short story. As a painter, your words were relatable. I enjoyed the imagery your words created. The artwork works perfectly. Did you paint it?
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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I really enjoyed reading your short story. As a painter, your words were relatable. I enjoyed the imagery your words created. The artwork works perfectly. Did you paint it?
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thanks for reviewing, fellow painter. No, I don't do realist/surrealist work like that... the credit line is in the notes at the bottom.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well written. Good work.
What is 'tearaway'?
I think you described my pencil - with a mind of its own it scratches semblances of words across page after page, totally indecipherable when it comes time to transcribe them to type.
Good luck and best wishes.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Well written. Good work.
What is 'tearaway'?
I think you described my pencil - with a mind of its own it scratches semblances of words across page after page, totally indecipherable when it comes time to transcribe them to type.
Good luck and best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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In my country the definition of tearaway is someone who behaves in a wild or reckless manner.
As I am left-handed, my writing sounds like a good match for your scratchings.
Comment from Bill Schott
Seems like there was a "brush with romance" here, which Hayley handled up to a certain point. Looks like she finally got a grip on what made her happy. Different strokes, I guess.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Seems like there was a "brush with romance" here, which Hayley handled up to a certain point. Looks like she finally got a grip on what made her happy. Different strokes, I guess.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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She fell in love with Art - maybe that's what she named her paintbrush.
Comment from giraffmang
Some time later, he became her lover.- this line brings forth some imagery I'm not really sure the writer intended... (or given the final paragraphs, maybe you did)
and pairing it with the previous association of him being like a teenage boy is a bit worrying...
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Some time later, he became her lover.- this line brings forth some imagery I'm not really sure the writer intended... (or given the final paragraphs, maybe you did)
and pairing it with the previous association of him being like a teenage boy is a bit worrying...
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Intentional. It's a progression from inexperience to artistic accomplishment, and a connection for life, like a relationship maturing.
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...like having sex with a paintbrush - got it
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oooh, that tickles my fancy.
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lol, brilliant. good luck in the competition
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:))
Comment from Thatguypk
This is the best of the Personification poem that I have read so far. Beautifully expressive, and I truly love the image of the paintbrush having a mind of it's own, progressing from a wild-child to a more mature and artistic instrument. Very very well done.
PK
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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This is the best of the Personification poem that I have read so far. Beautifully expressive, and I truly love the image of the paintbrush having a mind of it's own, progressing from a wild-child to a more mature and artistic instrument. Very very well done.
PK
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Thank you so very much for your encouraging comments and high rating.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
What an imagination. Wow, this was very interesting to read. And the picture was amazing. This was a great poem to read. I hope you win the contest. Good luck with your future work.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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What an imagination. Wow, this was very interesting to read. And the picture was amazing. This was a great poem to read. I hope you win the contest. Good luck with your future work.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Reading your comments made me feel good. Thank you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Hayley's paintbrush had a mind of its own, so despite mischief, her order of identification of the mischief doer was right and she needed the mischief doer boy and he personified her and now they would grow old together; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Hayley's paintbrush had a mind of its own, so despite mischief, her order of identification of the mischief doer was right and she needed the mischief doer boy and he personified her and now they would grow old together; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem - thanks for reviewing.
