Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery.

Being broke sucks. LoL Well done.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022

Thanks for reading. Sadly, my lack of money has made life kinda sucky lately. :)

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Almost perfect. What's a sitch?
What can a man say
in somewhat reasonable way
about 5-7-5's ? ....................................
give a rating based on enjoyability, maybe.
Picture and poem
together effective.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022

Its short for situation, it's really a word...:) Thank you for this nice review. :)

reply by Tom Horonzy on 20-Feb-2022

FYI. I couldn't find it in my dictionary. Dated? In the service we used situ for situation.

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022

I just Google it...I think its a slang word.

reply by Tom Horonzy on 20-Feb-2022

ok

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

cute poem. Lottery tickets can be lucky or not lucky. We always hope we will be a winner; it is just like gambling. Some have luck others don't. Good luck in the contest. Like your poem.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022

Thank you, for this great review. My oldest son actually won 10 thousand dollars on a 2 dollar scratch ticket! Thanks again. :)

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

Lol! Love this! That's me too unfortunately! I never win but it doesn't stop me from trying. Very cute poem! Good luck in your gambling endeavors!!!!!

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022

Thank you for this thoughtful review, I hope I win soon. Have a good evening.

Comment from Wanderlust53

Excellent

Very cute. Fun rhymes and the pictures accompanying added to the fun. I've tried the lottery, my sitch is still being broke. Thanks for sharing-keep writing.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022

Thank you, same here. I'm still trying though...thanks for this nice review. :)

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

This 50705 is both clever and cute. I love the way you worked in all the rhymes. Your syllable count is perfect. I love the empty pockets in the picture. Best wishes in the contest. Carol

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022

Thank you for this positive review, I really appreciate it. :)

reply by Carol Clark2 on 20-Feb-2022

Oops, I meant 5-7-5. I hope it does well in the contest. Have a great week.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I never buy these cards and the printers of them must make a fortune as there is rarely a winning ticket and I don't think I know anyone who has ever won! A poignant 5-7-5 here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022

Thank you for this nice review. My son actually won 10 thousand dollars on one 2 dollar scratch ticket. We've been waiting for him to win again ever since... hahaha. :)

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Love the rhyming. My situation is similar to yours - can't afford the lottery ticket to try to get rich. High hopes are a waste of energy. Fun posting - good choices of illustrations.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022

Thank you for reading my poem, it's great to hear from you. :)