A Place That Dreams Are Made Of
Cobblestone Street...42 total reviews
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Hi! I am thinking of posting poetry again! It's been so long. Found your name on on one of my old pieces' reviews. Thought I would pop by.
I love your 5-7-5 poem. These are always challenging and poignant when done right. You did it right!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Hi! I am thinking of posting poetry again! It's been so long. Found your name on on one of my old pieces' reviews. Thought I would pop by.
I love your 5-7-5 poem. These are always challenging and poignant when done right. You did it right!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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I love to hear that you want to write poetry again... Sorry if you wrote this a while ago; Haven't been here for a while. But, I also, need to write again as well... It is food for the soul, an umbrella on a rainy day, a light to be followed until its final flicker... You have inspired me. Let's keep in touch!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Ooh, the thrill of the unknown, being where danger lies, against the grain, doing what we've been told we shouldn't. The little kid in us, which never dies . . . or at least not anytime soon, we hope. Thanks for sharing.
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Ooh, the thrill of the unknown, being where danger lies, against the grain, doing what we've been told we shouldn't. The little kid in us, which never dies . . . or at least not anytime soon, we hope. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2022
Comment from Mickamus J
The words are few and how they create the suspense and the way how it leads me enthusiastically to the next part. I love the picture too! Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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The words are few and how they create the suspense and the way how it leads me enthusiastically to the next part. I love the picture too! Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for your very insightful review... love it. di
Comment from dragonpoet
Diane,
The door is a metaphor for the possibilities of life and the way out of fear and darkess. Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Diane,
The door is a metaphor for the possibilities of life and the way out of fear and darkess. Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
Comment from Janetsue
Your connected message and artwork is very intriguing. It is thrilling to imagine what lies behind that door. I enjoyed reading this very much and wish you the best in the 5-7-5 contest.
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Your connected message and artwork is very intriguing. It is thrilling to imagine what lies behind that door. I enjoyed reading this very much and wish you the best in the 5-7-5 contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from rspoet
Hello Di,
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem with wonderful description
and imagery of the scene.
The picture is unnecessary as the words convey all.
One would no doubt be eager to proceed down that corridor.
Well done.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Robert
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Hello Di,
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem with wonderful description
and imagery of the scene.
The picture is unnecessary as the words convey all.
One would no doubt be eager to proceed down that corridor.
Well done.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from MissMerri
This is an exciting adventure. I feel like I'm walking through one of those "under the street" streets. Can't wait to find out where this leads! The picture plus your words really do stimulate the imagination. I think you should write a long story now. ;p MM
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This is an exciting adventure. I feel like I'm walking through one of those "under the street" streets. Can't wait to find out where this leads! The picture plus your words really do stimulate the imagination. I think you should write a long story now. ;p MM
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from June Sargent
Oh, this reeks of Victorian drama! Those cobblestone streets glowing eerily in the light beckon the curious. What secrets are hidden behind those creaking doors??? Let the adventure begin, Watson! I loved this - perfect artwork as well.
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Oh, this reeks of Victorian drama! Those cobblestone streets glowing eerily in the light beckon the curious. What secrets are hidden behind those creaking doors??? Let the adventure begin, Watson! I loved this - perfect artwork as well.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from Terry Palardy
I like the image you chose to accompany your poem ... it added a twist to your closing line... the unexpected always makes a poem more memorable. Thank you for sharing your talent here.
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I like the image you chose to accompany your poem ... it added a twist to your closing line... the unexpected always makes a poem more memorable. Thank you for sharing your talent here.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It is strange how at first people are scared, yet want to explore. There is an emptiness, yet, as stated, eagerness intrigues the wondering mind.
Thank you for the great picture and poem.
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It is strange how at first people are scared, yet want to explore. There is an emptiness, yet, as stated, eagerness intrigues the wondering mind.
Thank you for the great picture and poem.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
