Smoking
a 1-6-123 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, this was very good! Sharp and to the point. This should be a response to anyone smoking. Alas, I know people that had been smoking for over 50 years, and they are not going to quit (lol).
Great imagery, visuals and presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Oh, this was very good! Sharp and to the point. This should be a response to anyone smoking. Alas, I know people that had been smoking for over 50 years, and they are not going to quit (lol).
Great imagery, visuals and presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Both my father and brother died of lung cancer.
Comment from LJbutterfly
You've entered a really good rhyming poem in the contest. In just a few words, you've delivered an important health and safety message. Great job. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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You've entered a really good rhyming poem in the contest. In just a few words, you've delivered an important health and safety message. Great job. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks, LJ
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
That's how we feel sometimes. When life gets you down, do you inhale the smoky ashes or take a sniff from the butt you were trying to put out? Cancer could be waiting on the doorstep if you would take another puff.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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That's how we feel sometimes. When life gets you down, do you inhale the smoky ashes or take a sniff from the butt you were trying to put out? Cancer could be waiting on the doorstep if you would take another puff.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks for checking this out, Rosemary
Comment from lindafisher
There is a really strong message in this short poetic work. You could not have picked a more controversial subject. Very well done my friend. A good write.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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There is a really strong message in this short poetic work. You could not have picked a more controversial subject. Very well done my friend. A good write.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Linda
Comment from jaded831
Quit cold turkey that's the way to do it. Just make up your mind no more. Not only do smokers pollute themselves the pollute the air we breathe so they are killing those they love. Powerful poem.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Quit cold turkey that's the way to do it. Just make up your mind no more. Not only do smokers pollute themselves the pollute the air we breathe so they are killing those they love. Powerful poem.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Jaded
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think this bad habit is quite frowned upon these days. I have a family who live close to me and they smoke in their backyard and the smoke drifts up into the bedrooms of my house and I can never have my windows open, I find it so annoying! A fine 1-6-1 for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I think this bad habit is quite frowned upon these days. I have a family who live close to me and they smoke in their backyard and the smoke drifts up into the bedrooms of my house and I can never have my windows open, I find it so annoying! A fine 1-6-1 for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This entry for the 1-6-1 Contest writing prompt obeys the contest requirement with a full set of line-end rhymes. These are unforced and have good connectivity, so flow is ensured.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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This entry for the 1-6-1 Contest writing prompt obeys the contest requirement with a full set of line-end rhymes. These are unforced and have good connectivity, so flow is ensured.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Katherine
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Great rhymes.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Great rhymes.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Gypsy
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Love your poem! You did a great job with the prompt. I have been begging my husband to quit for years. I will share your poem with him. Hopefully your words will I inspire.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Love your poem! You did a great job with the prompt. I have been begging my husband to quit for years. I will share your poem with him. Hopefully your words will I inspire.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you, KL
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, the advice is above reproach and clearly and simply rendered in its starkly dramatic presentation - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this sage entry...
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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In my opinion, the advice is above reproach and clearly and simply rendered in its starkly dramatic presentation - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this sage entry...
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thanks, Eve
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You are very welcome...Eve
