Fast Food Flaw
Lacking will power leads to my...11 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Hahaha... oh ye of little willpower! Yum. Your well-rhymed poem tells a sorry tale of how we have become addicted to fat and sugar and salt. An entertaining poem that many relate to with their own willpower struggles.
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Hahaha... oh ye of little willpower! Yum. Your well-rhymed poem tells a sorry tale of how we have become addicted to fat and sugar and salt. An entertaining poem that many relate to with their own willpower struggles.
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review and your understanding. It's really appreciated. :)
