Away With You
Free Form Verse: Caged by fear no more...19 total reviews
Comment from royowen
It's good that we have at our disposal the love and benefit of having the best of both worlds, having access to the spiritual and also the natural, which solves and helps us to understand both worlds. Whether the irritation is either we have the answer, but applying it, well... beautifully written Di, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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It's good that we have at our disposal the love and benefit of having the best of both worlds, having access to the spiritual and also the natural, which solves and helps us to understand both worlds. Whether the irritation is either we have the answer, but applying it, well... beautifully written Di, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Roy!
So pleased my offering resonated with you!
diane
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Welcome Diane
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Diane. I like the way you formatted the lines. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery. You did a great job giving the background of this enemy and how you are now
standing firm to take back you life. Great job with the prompt.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Diane. I like the way you formatted the lines. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery. You did a great job giving the background of this enemy and how you are now
standing firm to take back you life. Great job with the prompt.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Hello Jan!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Away With You' is an exceptionally we-written poem with a compelling inner strength. It was a privilege to both read ad review a poem of this quality. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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'Away With You' is an exceptionally we-written poem with a compelling inner strength. It was a privilege to both read ad review a poem of this quality. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Hello, Duchess!
Much appreciated!
diane
Hello diane.
You're very welcome !
the Duchess
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
You did a great job with the prompt. I found you writing honest and raw. I think most can relate to your theme. I love the photo you chose, sets the tone immediately.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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You did a great job with the prompt. I found you writing honest and raw. I think most can relate to your theme. I love the photo you chose, sets the tone immediately.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you, KL!
A cathartic write; that is for certain.
Thank you!
diane
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This is gorgeous. It really captures that feeling of casting off the shackles of whatever has been holding you back. It makes it clear that casting if off isn't easy, which is good. I can see many different struggles that could be relatable to this work.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This is gorgeous. It really captures that feeling of casting off the shackles of whatever has been holding you back. It makes it clear that casting if off isn't easy, which is good. I can see many different struggles that could be relatable to this work.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hello R.B.!
So pleased my verse resonated with you.
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Sally Law
This is a stunning poem on fear. Peace is the opposite of fear and how we long for it like a caged bird, knowing instinctively, that we are meant to be free from its iron grip.
Beautifully penned and illustrated for the contest, mystery poet. Six stars for your achievement today, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This is a stunning poem on fear. Peace is the opposite of fear and how we long for it like a caged bird, knowing instinctively, that we are meant to be free from its iron grip.
Beautifully penned and illustrated for the contest, mystery poet. Six stars for your achievement today, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Sally!
I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
Much appreciation!
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You are very welcome! Blessings,
Sally :))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fear is something than can gnaw away at us until it takes over and I have felt that fear in me as we all fear something in life, a fine free write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Fear is something than can gnaw away at us until it takes over and I have felt that fear in me as we all fear something in life, a fine free write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Much appreciation, Dolly!
Thank you!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Yes, you have the power to cast the gloom away. Out with the old, in with the new you. This was great. Keep on writing, thank you for sharing. Good luck. Stay safe.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Yes, you have the power to cast the gloom away. Out with the old, in with the new you. This was great. Keep on writing, thank you for sharing. Good luck. Stay safe.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Much appreciation, Carolyn!
Thank you!
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 'ends with quiet' poem, Away With You, is a well-worded verse which acknowledges that fear only has the power that we give it.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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This 'ends with quiet' poem, Away With You, is a well-worded verse which acknowledges that fear only has the power that we give it.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Bill...
Much appreciated.
Comment from Wendy G
This is a very different and interesting one. The fear that is so loud in your lives must be silenced and done away with so that you can have peace - and quiet. Well written. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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This is a very different and interesting one. The fear that is so loud in your lives must be silenced and done away with so that you can have peace - and quiet. Well written. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Wendy!
Much appreciation!
