Puppy Love Won
Russian Family Story contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from SimianSavant
I was going back in time today to figure out which of my stuff has gotten taken down by the site, and just discovered this old gem in the Russian Family Story writing contest. LOL. Nice work. Maybe it's time for a new contest about Putin.
-HFP
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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I was going back in time today to figure out which of my stuff has gotten taken down by the site, and just discovered this old gem in the Russian Family Story writing contest. LOL. Nice work. Maybe it's time for a new contest about Putin.
-HFP
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Hahaaaa. I totally forgot about this one. Yeah, this was fun. I'm sure offing little Joey pissed some folks off. Haha. Thanks for the review, friend.
Comment from Mickamus J
Nice contrast towards the end about who really needed to be replaced. It is interesting that this comparison has been done. Thank you for your sharing!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Nice contrast towards the end about who really needed to be replaced. It is interesting that this comparison has been done. Thank you for your sharing!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Mickamusa. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from Mimi Whittaker
Fun twist on a story that we all wish was true- except maybe for the murder part! :) I love the understanding that who were are is created sometimes by life experiences and how we handle them.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Fun twist on a story that we all wish was true- except maybe for the murder part! :) I love the understanding that who were are is created sometimes by life experiences and how we handle them.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Might you have any advice on how to improve the piece? 3 stars means below average and need improvement. Yes, there was murder in it but at the top of the piece it had a warning for violence. When there's a warning for violence there might be some sort of murdering. Lol. Thank you for the review, Mimi. I'm just slightly confused at the below average rating if you liked the piece.
Comment from LyndaS
Wow. This was a great little story about saving the world. HAHA! I like the idea of going back in time to correct everything that's screwed up today in Europe. The idea of a puppy changing a person's life is very clever. I'm sure the pet people here will love it. Too bad you couldn't get some unwelcome sex and a person dying in a hospital in here. lol Great job and a very entertaining write. Lynda
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Wow. This was a great little story about saving the world. HAHA! I like the idea of going back in time to correct everything that's screwed up today in Europe. The idea of a puppy changing a person's life is very clever. I'm sure the pet people here will love it. Too bad you couldn't get some unwelcome sex and a person dying in a hospital in here. lol Great job and a very entertaining write. Lynda
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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I sure wasn't planning on seeing a six for this silly piece. Lol. Wow, thank you so much, Lynda. Yeah, 500 words sneaks up on you quickly. I might have tried getting the other two in there as well. Lol. Thank you so much, Lynda. You made my day. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Congratulations, you got 3 of the 5 actions into your story and it is giggle-worthy, maybe more so if no brains needed blasting. Thanks for stopping WW3. If only you could.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Congratulations, you got 3 of the 5 actions into your story and it is giggle-worthy, maybe more so if no brains needed blasting. Thanks for stopping WW3. If only you could.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Carol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from James Ott
I found this story fine as it moved to the fantastic world of a time machine. The inside tale of the person losing his chance against a brute was okay. But I do not like the ending, not because I am a Biden fan, but that it is just more killing in any case. Otherwise, it is a good effort and could use a different ending.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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I found this story fine as it moved to the fantastic world of a time machine. The inside tale of the person losing his chance against a brute was okay. But I do not like the ending, not because I am a Biden fan, but that it is just more killing in any case. Otherwise, it is a good effort and could use a different ending.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Tough shit. You're not suppose to rate on how you view death. It had a warning for violence on it but you still read it so that's on you, James. Thanks for the 2 stars.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have added several of the suggested elements to create a violent and politically incorrect story, but one that set many of the threads of future political events to rights. You could have extended it to include other current leaders. I think that all our current leaders have in common that they don't deserve the confidence that they have been granted. Please find a world-wide solution...
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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You have added several of the suggested elements to create a violent and politically incorrect story, but one that set many of the threads of future political events to rights. You could have extended it to include other current leaders. I think that all our current leaders have in common that they don't deserve the confidence that they have been granted. Please find a world-wide solution...
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Lol. I'll try. I actually came into a problem with the word count. Here I was worrying about the minimum word count limit for this contest but then ran into not having enough words in the 500 max to work with. Lol. So I can't really add to the silly piece. Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Katherine. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous write.
