Minnesota Spring
Just dreaming about a...10 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
This is a lovely poem with a beautiful presentation. Your poem reads smoothly and you have crafted your rhymes with care. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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This is a lovely poem with a beautiful presentation. Your poem reads smoothly and you have crafted your rhymes with care. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from zanya
Here are stanzas exuding a sense of sheer joy at the prospect of the onset of the season of Spring -'smell of wet earth permeates the air'- my favourite season too!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Here are stanzas exuding a sense of sheer joy at the prospect of the onset of the season of Spring -'smell of wet earth permeates the air'- my favourite season too!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :) also, those lovely stars. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Spring in MN can be one of the most enjoyable times to hike. The waterfalls flow faster with the melting of the ice and snow. The heat isn't bad and the bugs are still in hibernation. Thank God!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Spring in MN can be one of the most enjoyable times to hike. The waterfalls flow faster with the melting of the ice and snow. The heat isn't bad and the bugs are still in hibernation. Thank God!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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You are right! I can't stand bugs, especially mosquitoes, they eat me alive. Spring though is perfect, relatively bug free. Thanks for this great review. :)
Comment from jessizero
This was a good poem for spring. You've made it seem lovely, and I am looking forward to winter ending and spring springing again. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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This was a good poem for spring. You've made it seem lovely, and I am looking forward to winter ending and spring springing again. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this very nice review...it's so good to hear from you.:)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Poem for Spring writing prompt contest.
I love the nature theme.
You have a strong form and flow.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the Poem for Spring writing prompt contest.
I love the nature theme.
You have a strong form and flow.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Spring is such a beautiful time of the year. It is my second favorite season next to fall. You have written a beautiful tribute to the season and without using any of the forbidden words!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Spring is such a beautiful time of the year. It is my second favorite season next to fall. You have written a beautiful tribute to the season and without using any of the forbidden words!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you once again for a wonderful review...it's amazing. :)
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, when one gets a little tired of the interminable cold weather their thoughts turn to the thoughts of approaching imminent spring where the weather will become warmer, the ice melts, the wild flowers bloom. Beautifully written a poem in articulate, quatrains in abcb rhyme pentametric stanzas, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Oh yes, when one gets a little tired of the interminable cold weather their thoughts turn to the thoughts of approaching imminent spring where the weather will become warmer, the ice melts, the wild flowers bloom. Beautifully written a poem in articulate, quatrains in abcb rhyme pentametric stanzas, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, it's very appreciated. :)
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Most welcome
Comment from Carlos' girl
That last paragraph really pulls this poem together. Perfect. I like the poem and I feel it which is always a plus..
My least favorite season is Spring but you have helped redeem it in my eyes!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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That last paragraph really pulls this poem together. Perfect. I like the poem and I feel it which is always a plus..
My least favorite season is Spring but you have helped redeem it in my eyes!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)
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My pleasure
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I'm also living in Minnesota and looking forward to the spring. You name all the things that will wake up or come upon us in a month including the puddles and the wet smell of early spring. Yes. I can't wait.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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I'm also living in Minnesota and looking forward to the spring. You name all the things that will wake up or come upon us in a month including the puddles and the wet smell of early spring. Yes. I can't wait.
Well done.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you! I'm in Duluth about 150 miles from the twin cities. Where do you live? We just got around 11 inches of snow, so spring seems like a dream...lol. It will get here sooner or later. Thanks again for reading my poem. :)
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I live in St. Paul and we often drive to Tofte to hike and ski. We are avid cross country skiers so we like snow. But I can't wait for spring.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem about spring is excellent. First of all, you did avoid all words in the list--quite a challenge. It is skillfully written and vividly descriptive of
of the appealing elements of spring.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Your poem about spring is excellent. First of all, you did avoid all words in the list--quite a challenge. It is skillfully written and vividly descriptive of
of the appealing elements of spring.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank so much for this fine review, it's always great to hear from you. :)
