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Heart Crafted Poems - 2022

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Musings of an old man - 2022

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Comment from jessizero
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This was incredibly sad. I am sorry for your troubles and the loss of your sister. Thank you for sharing your story with the rest of the community. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
    Thank you, all is well!
Comment from Pangalactic
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I'm so sorry for your loss. You must have so many emotions swirling right now.
I hope you find the answers to your questions - you deserve to know the details

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
    I do value your review and while all the questions couldn't be answered, many balnk pages were filled in.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Your story is well written but so sad. I can understand your reason for leaving home but I am sorry that you broke all ties with your sister. I admire you for sharing this, and hope that as you contact the person you mentioned, you will learn more about your sister.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
    Thanks for not judging Annne,
reply by Anne Johnston on 01-Mar-2022
    We should never judge another unless we have walked in their shoes.
Comment from lancellot
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This is well written, emotional and written so that the reader can fully understand what happened and how such things happen. The sister became... collateral damage.

Things happen like that, sometimes we part and never reunite. The reasons are many, the ending is the same.



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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
    Yes this happens to far too many families. Thanks for your comments.
Comment from Bridge
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Very well written piece. I'm sorry you could not be a part of your sisters life. I would have liked a few more details, like what made you stay away from your family for so long but overall well written
With regards

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 Comment Written 01-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
    Thanks, while limited to word count, I can only confess, life got into the way and time ran out?.