Never Waste It
Time...8 total reviews
Comment from Rena Smith
I think this is a good poem and I love it because it is so true about time. The poet did a great job. The poet chose the right title and this poem is one that every reader can relate too because like the poet alludes too; "time will run out for all of us!" This is so true and I really enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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I think this is a good poem and I love it because it is so true about time. The poet did a great job. The poet chose the right title and this poem is one that every reader can relate too because like the poet alludes too; "time will run out for all of us!" This is so true and I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this excellent review, I'm so glad you liked it, It really means a lot to me. Hope you have a wonderful evening. :)
Comment from Versch
Wasted time is lost forever. The first stanza reminds me when I was a kid when time seems to go slow, and now that I am getting older, years seems to fly away. I wish you luck in all your dreams, and in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Wasted time is lost forever. The first stanza reminds me when I was a kid when time seems to go slow, and now that I am getting older, years seems to fly away. I wish you luck in all your dreams, and in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this insightful review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Richard Montfort Cary
Wonderful words strung into rhyme and rhythm and sense and the ultimate truth of a theme about time running out, and no fear about it. Thanks for a wonderful post!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Wonderful words strung into rhyme and rhythm and sense and the ultimate truth of a theme about time running out, and no fear about it. Thanks for a wonderful post!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thanks for this nice review, you don't know how much I appreciate it. :)
Comment from Thatguypk
Tick-tock! Start rolling out those children's books of rhyme. This is a lovely piece, and a TIMEly reminder to make the most of every moment. Thanks for sharing.
PK
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Tick-tock! Start rolling out those children's books of rhyme. This is a lovely piece, and a TIMEly reminder to make the most of every moment. Thanks for sharing.
PK
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much, I'm working on it, although I can't draw or afford to have illustrations done. I hope to publish on Amazon someday. Thanks again.:)
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Try the PeoplePerHour website. You can get really good illustrators at reasonable prices there. I've used it myself. :-)
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Hello fellow writer a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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I've read some of the entries and they are all terrific. Too much competition in my opinion..;) Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from jessizero
Time marches onward, never ceasing. You're right that it goes slowly when you are young, but it races once you grow older. I like your advice at the end. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Time marches onward, never ceasing. You're right that it goes slowly when you are young, but it races once you grow older. I like your advice at the end. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from John Ciarmello
I enjoyed this piece. It flowed perfectly and I didn't feel a bit of my time wasted. Doesn't it seem no matter how hard we all try to set back and smell the roses; everyday life pulls it from our grasp. Well, maybe someday? Great write! Much success with the contest
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed this piece. It flowed perfectly and I didn't feel a bit of my time wasted. Doesn't it seem no matter how hard we all try to set back and smell the roses; everyday life pulls it from our grasp. Well, maybe someday? Great write! Much success with the contest
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thanks for this thoughtful review and your insightful comments. :)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Perfect. The words of the wise. I enjoyed this realistic poem. You have my vote. I hope you win. You said a mouth full. Thank you. I wish you the best. And, I hope you win. Good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Perfect. The words of the wise. I enjoyed this realistic poem. You have my vote. I hope you win. You said a mouth full. Thank you. I wish you the best. And, I hope you win. Good luck.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and your kind words...both are appreciated. :)
