The Return
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Return Chapter 10"Erotic Turmoil
36 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Good morning, dear friend
Another well-written chapter! Showing the sensual tension within Margot and her self-scolding is a great undercurrent while at the same time we experience Miles's love for Meg. So Bessie was sent away when Meg died...interesting to know if that was a coincidence or on purpose by someone. As Miles's memory of Margot and Bessie fades, it could get quite sticky for them to solve the mystery of Meg's death. A lot to think about!!!
Another wonderful chapter filled with bits of clues. I love this story. It's earned all it's accolades and much more.
Smiles, hugs and love to you - Carol
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
  |
Good morning, dear friend
Another well-written chapter! Showing the sensual tension within Margot and her self-scolding is a great undercurrent while at the same time we experience Miles's love for Meg. So Bessie was sent away when Meg died...interesting to know if that was a coincidence or on purpose by someone. As Miles's memory of Margot and Bessie fades, it could get quite sticky for them to solve the mystery of Meg's death. A lot to think about!!!
Another wonderful chapter filled with bits of clues. I love this story. It's earned all it's accolades and much more.
Smiles, hugs and love to you - Carol
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
-
The good thing about Margot and Bessie is, they can't be seen, and can go and snoop wherever they want. Only Margot has seen Bessie in her time, and only Miles in this time, although he is forgetting her now. I'm so pleased you like my story, Carol, thank you so much for this lovely review and the golden stars.
Love and hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
"Muzzle with a short leash," tell us what you really think. LOL. It takes me back to when my teenage sweetheart broke up with me, saying that, I was a little girls dream, but untamable. LOL. I'm glad she didn't know you or I'd have had leather burns. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
 |
"Muzzle with a short leash," tell us what you really think. LOL. It takes me back to when my teenage sweetheart broke up with me, saying that, I was a little girls dream, but untamable. LOL. I'm glad she didn't know you or I'd have had leather burns. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
-
LOL!! I'm sure you did need a short leash! Your sweetheart certainly had you sussed out, bless her. Thank you, Ric, for this lovely review, and for giving me a giggle. Love and hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Sandra,
Another good addition to the story. old Bessie must surely get about some... lol
When he was satisfied, he beckoned the women, indicating they should follow him. - I don't think you need from indicating onward, beckon would cover it. Or beckoned them to join him.
to handle the living, breathing, magnificent hunk of a man in real life ... that would be too much to cope with.- yes I can relate to this....
She had no choice. She had to look up. She had to stare into those coal-black eyes- maybe try and omit one of the usages of had. you have 3 here. Maybe something like - She had no choice but to look up into those... They drew her in.
to run amok in his long, soft, wavy hair. - yep. I get this, too.
Miles lie there trying to work things out. - lay.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
|
Hi Sandra,
Another good addition to the story. old Bessie must surely get about some... lol
When he was satisfied, he beckoned the women, indicating they should follow him. - I don't think you need from indicating onward, beckon would cover it. Or beckoned them to join him.
to handle the living, breathing, magnificent hunk of a man in real life ... that would be too much to cope with.- yes I can relate to this....
She had no choice. She had to look up. She had to stare into those coal-black eyes- maybe try and omit one of the usages of had. you have 3 here. Maybe something like - She had no choice but to look up into those... They drew her in.
to run amok in his long, soft, wavy hair. - yep. I get this, too.
Miles lie there trying to work things out. - lay.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
-
Thanks so much, Gareth, I'm made the changes, and the corrections. I could see from your Facebook photo that you would understand Margot wanting to run her fingers through his long, soft, wavy hair!! But I'd need a full length photo of you for the magnificent hunk part! LOL!!
Thanks for this lovely review, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from BethShelby
I'm still wondering about Bessie. Is she some kind of angel that is sent where she is needed to fix wrongs that have been committed. I think it is funny how attracted Margot is too Miles. It is taking a lot of willpower to keep her from melting into his arms. I imagine that would really complicate things. I hope when this is solved she find someone who will meet her physical needs Miles has aroused. LOL I'm loving the story.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
|
I'm still wondering about Bessie. Is she some kind of angel that is sent where she is needed to fix wrongs that have been committed. I think it is funny how attracted Margot is too Miles. It is taking a lot of willpower to keep her from melting into his arms. I imagine that would really complicate things. I hope when this is solved she find someone who will meet her physical needs Miles has aroused. LOL I'm loving the story.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
-
You have it right, Beth, but not a word to anyone!!! Lol. I might be using her again. Margot is struggling, which is natural really when you think that Meg is so much like her. But, don't worry about her, there are some twists coming, and the ending is already written, (in draft) which I'm sure you'll like. Thanks so much for this lovely review, my friend, it was fabulous. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Shirley McLain
I'm now anxious to find out what happened to Meg and by whom. I am also wondering where the romance that Margot is building will lead. You did a great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
|
I'm now anxious to find out what happened to Meg and by whom. I am also wondering where the romance that Margot is building will lead. You did a great job. Shirley
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
-
There is a lot happening in the coming chapters, and a few twists as well. Thank you so very much, dear Shirley, for your lovely review and that golden star, I really appreciate it. Love and hugs, Sandra!
ps. huge congratulations of winning the story, it really deserved to win, I kept my eyes on it all the way through. xxx
Comment from John Ciarmello
I hate when you disappear for so long, Sandra, lol. I know, however, that you are working on the next wonderful chapter of this wonderful saga. I've got a better feel for Bessie now. You know that makes me happy! So, Margot and Bessie are running against time. Miles will soon forget them? which will leave them alone to figure out what happened to Meg. Ah, what a great chapter. I'll be waiting! :))))))). Btw, I've wanted to six star every chapter, but I decided to save my last one for the end of this book. I hope this is finding you well.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
|
I hate when you disappear for so long, Sandra, lol. I know, however, that you are working on the next wonderful chapter of this wonderful saga. I've got a better feel for Bessie now. You know that makes me happy! So, Margot and Bessie are running against time. Miles will soon forget them? which will leave them alone to figure out what happened to Meg. Ah, what a great chapter. I'll be waiting! :))))))). Btw, I've wanted to six star every chapter, but I decided to save my last one for the end of this book. I hope this is finding you well.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2022
-
The sixes are fine, but the reviews are far more important, John. And yours are always amazing. I really have appreciated every one. Margot and Bessie have enough to get started, the rest will be discovered as they go along. Some real twisters coming up!! Thanks, my friend. Always a pleasure to read you reviews. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
