Languid Ease
a Minute poetic form28 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Melissa,
This looks like the perfect place to read a book on an sunny Summer day.
It is a beautiful field of wild flowers. It would be a great place to write too.
I recognized the artwork as a Monet.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keepw writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Melissa,
This looks like the perfect place to read a book on an sunny Summer day.
It is a beautiful field of wild flowers. It would be a great place to write too.
I recognized the artwork as a Monet.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keepw writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much, sweet Joan :)
Melissa
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You are most kindly welcome, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from Irish Rain
Well I missed this!!
It is just so beautiful,
and the picture couldn't
be more perfect.
Congratulations on this
wonderful first place win!!!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Well I missed this!!
It is just so beautiful,
and the picture couldn't
be more perfect.
Congratulations on this
wonderful first place win!!!
Blessings...
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Hi Judy. Thank you for your sweet comments. I always cherish your take on my writing. :)
Melissa
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You're most welcome!!!
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much!!! I am so honored!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an excellent entry for the minute poem contest.
I love the picture and how it sits perfectly with the poem.
The minute rhyming itself allows the reader to feel lazy and at ease, wanting to be under the same umbrella reading a good book. Ahh, smell that fresh air. Enjoy the six shower.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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This is an excellent entry for the minute poem contest.
I love the picture and how it sits perfectly with the poem.
The minute rhyming itself allows the reader to feel lazy and at ease, wanting to be under the same umbrella reading a good book. Ahh, smell that fresh air. Enjoy the six shower.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, DD. I loved splashing through the shower of six... LOL. So appreciate your review!!
Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This minute poem, Languid Ease, has the proper formatting and creates a lovely scene where the free-floating flora spores help to lull the observer into a morning nap. Nice.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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This minute poem, Languid Ease, has the proper formatting and creates a lovely scene where the free-floating flora spores help to lull the observer into a morning nap. Nice.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Hi Bill. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from Terry Palardy
Very nicely rhymed, with a meter that is calming and soothing as well. I admire your choice of image to illustrate the quiet mood of this poem. Thank you for sharing both the image and poem here with us.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Very nicely rhymed, with a meter that is calming and soothing as well. I admire your choice of image to illustrate the quiet mood of this poem. Thank you for sharing both the image and poem here with us.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Terry.
Melissa
Comment from Debbie Pope
You are lulling me into a delicious sleep, Melissa. Your poem is not boring of course. It's just that your rhythm, rhyme, and word choices are peaceful. Heavenly even.
This is beautiful. Another winner in my eyes.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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You are lulling me into a delicious sleep, Melissa. Your poem is not boring of course. It's just that your rhythm, rhyme, and word choices are peaceful. Heavenly even.
This is beautiful. Another winner in my eyes.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Hi Sweet Debbie. I hope you are well. I told my husband about your story of the oil rigs at dinner last night. Since we both have had new glasses recently, we got a chuckle over your dilemma and the pirate ship. LOL. So cute. Thank you for your lovely review and the stars, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Ulla
Hi Melissa, I simply loved your Minute poem. It not only had such wonderful imagery but the rhythm is wonderful, as well. Your poem also goes so well with the picture.
It's the best I've read so fat for the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Hi Melissa, I simply loved your Minute poem. It not only had such wonderful imagery but the rhythm is wonderful, as well. Your poem also goes so well with the picture.
It's the best I've read so fat for the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Hello Ulla. Thanks so much. I had a difficult time matching a photo/art to my verse until I saw this work by Monet... just knew in an instant that they belonged together... thanks so much, Ulla!!!
Melissa
Comment from jessizero
This was a beautiful collection of images. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us in the community. Keep up the good work, and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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This was a beautiful collection of images. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us in the community. Keep up the good work, and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Jess!!
Melissa
Comment from juliaSjames
Beautiful, Melissa. Perfect portrayal of those "lazy hazy days of summer". Although here in Virginia we'd have to be protected by bug spray and straw hats!
Impeccable metre and excellent rhyming allow the grace notes of your imagery to soar in the reader's mind.
In the first stanza, "noon/afternoon" works as a rhyme. But since this is a contest entry you might want to play with it. Or not. It's your choice of course.
Best of luck in the contest and kudos on placing in the sonnet competition.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Beautiful, Melissa. Perfect portrayal of those "lazy hazy days of summer". Although here in Virginia we'd have to be protected by bug spray and straw hats!
Impeccable metre and excellent rhyming allow the grace notes of your imagery to soar in the reader's mind.
In the first stanza, "noon/afternoon" works as a rhyme. But since this is a contest entry you might want to play with it. Or not. It's your choice of course.
Best of luck in the contest and kudos on placing in the sonnet competition.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022
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Thank you Julia, I am delighted you liked it and will look at that rhyme scheme of noon/afternoon.
We also live in Virginia ~ Chester, just south of Richmond. I know what you mean about that bug spray... LOL
Melissa
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We're in Falls Church, near DC. The gnats are still asleep. For now. Last year my daughter in law was talking about getting bats. Talk about the cute being worse than the disease!!! LOL
