Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Spring Splashes"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
There is such lovely vivid imagery in your stack 5-7-5 poems. It is so enchanting to read and visualise. You chose a grand subject in which to write this contest entry, and I think it is a really strong contender. Very well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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There is such lovely vivid imagery in your stack 5-7-5 poems. It is so enchanting to read and visualise. You chose a grand subject in which to write this contest entry, and I think it is a really strong contender. Very well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Sandra, thank you very much 🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from Thatguypk
Even without the accompanying picture, this verse conjures up a most colourful and pleasing image in my mind. Beautifully written, with beautiful language.
PK
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Even without the accompanying picture, this verse conjures up a most colourful and pleasing image in my mind. Beautifully written, with beautiful language.
PK
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thanks PK! 🙏🙏
Comment from John Ciarmello
Beautiful 5-7-5. It read as light and airy. A beautiful feeling of spring came through in this piece. It is refreshing to say the least. I wish you much success with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Beautiful 5-7-5. It read as light and airy. A beautiful feeling of spring came through in this piece. It is refreshing to say the least. I wish you much success with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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John, I do very much thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Stacked 5-7-5 Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Stacked 5-7-5 Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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My freind, I am very grateful too you for this validation, have a most peaceful weekend! Thank you!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It helps to know, and I thank you, for reminding us with the Spring the chance of snow is minimized. The only suggestion I have is changing one of the splashes. Perhaps, Splotches or droplets. idk .......................
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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It helps to know, and I thank you, for reminding us with the Spring the chance of snow is minimized. The only suggestion I have is changing one of the splashes. Perhaps, Splotches or droplets. idk .......................
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Tom, thanks! You may be quite right, thanks for the nudge.
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Just a passing thought
Comment from Mickamus J
Thank you for sharing the poem. It was a splash of colours and a myriad of colours to me. Spring is very beautiful and it is an amazing sight for all.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for sharing the poem. It was a splash of colours and a myriad of colours to me. Spring is very beautiful and it is an amazing sight for all.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Mickamus, thanks for dropping by my poem
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done stacked 5-7-5 for the contest. It shows the beauty of nature and the hope it brings and how the it is a metaphor for the hope that Easter brings us.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writng and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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This is a well done stacked 5-7-5 for the contest. It shows the beauty of nature and the hope it brings and how the it is a metaphor for the hope that Easter brings us.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writng and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you Joan, I hope all is well!
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My pleasure.
Joan
Comment from Sanku
This is a lovely and heartwarming poem about spring .true.Kaleidoscope can not match the beauty and intricate colouring of spring scene.All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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This is a lovely and heartwarming poem about spring .true.Kaleidoscope can not match the beauty and intricate colouring of spring scene.All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Sanku, thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Spring brings the colour back to our dull scene as this season has the strength to encourage growth and it is always a pleasure to welcome spring, you captured the essence of it here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Spring brings the colour back to our dull scene as this season has the strength to encourage growth and it is always a pleasure to welcome spring, you captured the essence of it here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Dolly, thank you for the validation.
Comment from Wendy G
What a great sense of joy in this beautiful suite of 5-7-5's. The language is very lyrical, sensual and bright.And to link the appearance of the flowers from the earth with the joy of the resurrection morning - superb. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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What a great sense of joy in this beautiful suite of 5-7-5's. The language is very lyrical, sensual and bright.And to link the appearance of the flowers from the earth with the joy of the resurrection morning - superb. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Wendy, thank you for the good wishes.
