Thy Passion
5-7-5 contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
No wonder it'll make me weep - I bloody well ordered fish and chips!!
You, the maestro at such things, expertly draw the reader in with words of old, setting up a different expectation... clever bastard.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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No wonder it'll make me weep - I bloody well ordered fish and chips!!
You, the maestro at such things, expertly draw the reader in with words of old, setting up a different expectation... clever bastard.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Yeah, I do that a lot on here. Lol. It seems keeping up with the flow of making it remain pretty throughout doesn't quite work for me. Whenever I do that, the piece just fails. So, might as well write something I figure will and have a chuckle and keep my fingers crossed. Lol. Thank you for the great review and stop by, Lisa.
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Comment from Carolyn Dooley
The picture is great, with the post. The picture fits the subject. You have a great poem. It is short, yet, tells the story. Thank you for posting this poem. You have a great day. Stay safe.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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The picture is great, with the post. The picture fits the subject. You have a great poem. It is short, yet, tells the story. Thank you for posting this poem. You have a great day. Stay safe.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Carolyn. O'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great day as well.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Thatguypk
Hahahaha! I'm so used to reading deeply religious and spiritual poems on this site, that from your title, I assumed more of the same, but you completely, and most pleasantly, foo;ed me! Praise be to the Pizza! :-)
Very well done.
PK
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Hahahaha! I'm so used to reading deeply religious and spiritual poems on this site, that from your title, I assumed more of the same, but you completely, and most pleasantly, foo;ed me! Praise be to the Pizza! :-)
Very well done.
PK
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Wow, I sure didn't plan on seeing a sixer on this silly piece. Lol. Thank you, my friend. Yes, there's way too much of the same thing over and over again on here. I always like to throw ridiculous stuff in the mix to change it up. Ha. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness, PK. I really appreciate the big six. Thanks again.
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Well worth the six... please do throw in the odd bit of silliness. It brightens up the site, and my day! :-)
PK
