Optimism After Rejection
(5/7/5) Her life was hard, but things are coming right.12 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I like the optimistic ending. Thank you for choosing to share your message here with the FanStory community. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
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I like the optimistic ending. Thank you for choosing to share your message here with the FanStory community. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
Comment from jaded831
Your poem conjures up emotions, makes the reader think, I like that. Life is a book we all have to read from day one. Every person is a book not written down,
your short piece reflects life.
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Your poem conjures up emotions, makes the reader think, I like that. Life is a book we all have to read from day one. Every person is a book not written down,
your short piece reflects life.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
Comment from Raul1
Yes, you are right. Life does write itself. I like the way you have expressed a book as if it was human. Very creative. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
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Yes, you are right. Life does write itself. I like the way you have expressed a book as if it was human. Very creative. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Isn't that the truth? ......................................................................................................................................................................
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Isn't that the truth? ......................................................................................................................................................................
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. It takes a certain skill set to be able to construct a complete story using a total of 17 syllables. You did a nice job.The photo you chose is perfect.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It takes a certain skill set to be able to construct a complete story using a total of 17 syllables. You did a nice job.The photo you chose is perfect.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We sometimes go through a rough patch in life and it is all experience that we gather that helps us to make sense of life and carve a good future for ourselves, wise words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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We sometimes go through a rough patch in life and it is all experience that we gather that helps us to make sense of life and carve a good future for ourselves, wise words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks for your review comments. You're so right about experience giving us perspective.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Many books are tossed aside. Ones that have been written by someone who had lived and experienced things in life. That could actually help or save someone's life. Sometimes, the first page does not rub the reader the right way. They do not give the book a chance. Everyone, even a book should have a second opinion. Thank you.
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Many books are tossed aside. Ones that have been written by someone who had lived and experienced things in life. That could actually help or save someone's life. Sometimes, the first page does not rub the reader the right way. They do not give the book a chance. Everyone, even a book should have a second opinion. Thank you.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Optimism After Rejection, has the right set up and notes that our stories do not need to follow a script or stay with another's plot. Each new chapter will fill in fresh pages of our individual lives. Nice.
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This 5-7-5, Optimism After Rejection, has the right set up and notes that our stories do not need to follow a script or stay with another's plot. Each new chapter will fill in fresh pages of our individual lives. Nice.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written poem. The message in this poem is profound. The last line of this poem really packs a punch. The picture you chose definitely compliments this poem well. Very nice.
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This is a well written poem. The message in this poem is profound. The last line of this poem really packs a punch. The picture you chose definitely compliments this poem well. Very nice.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5-7-5 Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5-7-5 Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
