Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Resist! Resist!"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Laurie Holding
Stunning, what you can do with just twenty-five syllables! And the photo you chose to accompany this piece is spot on. Great work, and I wish you all the success you so richly deserve.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Stunning, what you can do with just twenty-five syllables! And the photo you chose to accompany this piece is spot on. Great work, and I wish you all the success you so richly deserve.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Laurie, thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and presentation.
-Your notes and poem are appreciated,
along with your support of the Ukrainian people.
-You wrote a very good poem with the correct
syllable count, description, and rhyme.
-I like the message and how you are
behind these people being ravaged by
"Putin's power fixation."
-A very good entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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-Good image and presentation.
-Your notes and poem are appreciated,
along with your support of the Ukrainian people.
-You wrote a very good poem with the correct
syllable count, description, and rhyme.
-I like the message and how you are
behind these people being ravaged by
"Putin's power fixation."
-A very good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thanks Pam..
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You are welcome.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This war has got the undivided attention of millions (probably Billions) of people throughout the world. There has never been a time in history where the fate of the world was in the hands of one man. God, if you are paying attention, we could use you right now.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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This war has got the undivided attention of millions (probably Billions) of people throughout the world. There has never been a time in history where the fate of the world was in the hands of one man. God, if you are paying attention, we could use you right now.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Amen, my brother! Amen!
Comment from SimianSavant
Thanks for adding your voice to the Russia conversation. Even the previously pro-Russian, Russian speakers in Ukraine have had their cities wreaked and are furious at the devastation of their country by Putin. I was curious about your picture, as it does not appear to show war devastation -- could you explain the context?
Thanks for the read!
-Harambe
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thanks for adding your voice to the Russia conversation. Even the previously pro-Russian, Russian speakers in Ukraine have had their cities wreaked and are furious at the devastation of their country by Putin. I was curious about your picture, as it does not appear to show war devastation -- could you explain the context?
Thanks for the read!
-Harambe
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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My intention is to put a face on this topic not statistics. Too often we loose the harsh reality that bombs don?t stop at destroying buildings, hospital s and bridges, they destroy humanity?s Hopes and dreams.
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Yeah I get that, and the color of the picture delivers that tenor. I was just confused on the context of the picture -- if it was from Ukraine, and from the war, and how it related. Although not necessary (it is your piece after all) anything you could add explaining the pic in the author notes would be great!
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That is great input! thank you...
Comment from jenintorre
The Ukrainian people are such a wonderful race of people. I can't beleive that they are being targeted in this way by a total monster. A very hard hitting poem and wonderful artwork. Jen
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The Ukrainian people are such a wonderful race of people. I can't beleive that they are being targeted in this way by a total monster. A very hard hitting poem and wonderful artwork. Jen
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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thanks 🙏🙏🙏
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
I can't really comment on the subject matter, being across the world from this action. Especially when the Media Magician are manipulating and manufacturing fear into the masses. Keep Writing
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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I can't really comment on the subject matter, being across the world from this action. Especially when the Media Magician are manipulating and manufacturing fear into the masses. Keep Writing
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Terry Broxson
An excellent poem and commentary message for what is going on in the world today. It is a good entry for this contest, I hope it does well. If the pen is indeed mightier than the sword, then we need a whole lot more pens working! Good job!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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An excellent poem and commentary message for what is going on in the world today. It is a good entry for this contest, I hope it does well. If the pen is indeed mightier than the sword, then we need a whole lot more pens working! Good job!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job of telling a story with only 25 syllables. Your message was clear. Thank you for choosing to share this story here. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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You did a great job of telling a story with only 25 syllables. Your message was clear. Thank you for choosing to share this story here. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thankis!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed your poem. You did a nice job with the prompt. This should do well in the contest. You write about the human condition that the world is witnessing in utter disbelief.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed your poem. You did a nice job with the prompt. This should do well in the contest. You write about the human condition that the world is witnessing in utter disbelief.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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K/L/ thanks!
Comment from RodG
The poet here is echoing the sentiments of most of the world who hope the Ukrainians can reject the Russians. I am impressed you could convey your message in only 25 syllables and employ three good rhymes. Rod
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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The poet here is echoing the sentiments of most of the world who hope the Ukrainians can reject the Russians. I am impressed you could convey your message in only 25 syllables and employ three good rhymes. Rod
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Rod thank you a lot!
