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God and Putin

Satire Fiction about Putin

28 total reviews 
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Exceptional
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You have painted a grim and accurate picture of Putin. So many lies to his people and to the Ukrainians. If the reports are true, he may have trouble explaining so many deaths (6000 Russian soldiers one network reported) to his soldiers on their "training mission".

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    Thank you for the six stars! It?s a very sad situation.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Excellent
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Am I reading this correctly? I would hope this is meant in a sarcastic jargon. If it is not, it will reflect the stars. If it is, please forgive me. I probably should not have commented on this piece at all, and for that I consider myself reprimanded. I guess everyone one is entitled to different entitlements. I simply have never met someone in the United States of America with these kinds of thoughts.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    John the contest is for satire fiction about Putin's Special Operation (his label for invading Ukraine), if you could look at it in that light perhaps you could revaluate your rating, I do not believe this, it is just satire for the BS that Putin in putting forward. Thanks.
reply by John Ciarmello on 12-Mar-2022
reply by John Ciarmello on 12-Mar-2022
    Yes, I've been waiting to hear from you, lol. I saw the satire fiction after I returned to read it again in case I missed something. Obviously, I did. I am so sorry!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    LOL, the good news is it must have been really good satire fiction to make you some angry!
reply by John Ciarmello on 12-Mar-2022
    Yes, in this light it is sensational. I went immediately on the defensive. So, yes, it did its job! Lol. again, I am sorry.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    Lol, no problem!
Comment from Annmuma
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Excellent satire piece. Most of the world is united in condemnation of Russia--- unfortunately for Ukraine -- most of us are united on the sidelines. You draw the picture of the lying and evil that rests with Putin right now. Good piece and good luck in the contest. ann

I think I recognize a writer here -- Terry?

Saw one possible spag: in the first paragraph "a stretcher". Because you reference ladies as the subject, I think the direct object should be stretchers.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    Thank you very much! The Unknown Writer.
Comment from Sally Law
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It is sickening! I read a post from social media staying one of the mothers in the bombed out hospital was a acting former model. Well, now she is, and a poster child for human suffering. Thankfully, she and the child are fine for now. A wonderful piece of journalism.

Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sal :))

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    Thank you Sally, it is very sad indeed.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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You have really nailed it with this one. Satire at its best. Sorry, no sixes left. I can not wait until this miserable bastard is burning in the bowels of hell.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    Amen Paul!
Comment from royowen
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I think somebody's tongue is stuck firmly in your cheek with this great pro Outin, I must admit it's quite refreshing to see a different approach to an article about, I haven't written anything about or otherwise, with him in focus, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    Roy, you are the best!
reply by royowen on 12-Mar-2022
    Beautifully done
Comment from in777wr#
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This story followed the writing prompt well. These are things Putin would, and probably had said. The story reads well, and the message is clear. As I read this, I though about the people there. Overall, good story.

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    Thanks, it is very sad over there, my heart is breaking.
Comment from jessizero
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I see your point. This was most upsetting. Thank you for choosing to share your message with the community here at FanStory. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    Thank you very much!