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Artificial Intelligence

Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Theories"
A critique of technology

10 total reviews 
Comment from Irish Rain
Exceptional
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Yay you!
I totally agree.
I'm on my third reading of the Bible,
this time with study notes, (takes forever)
the more I read, the more sense it makes.
I attended RCIA Catholic classes years ago,
and they stressed that science, and the Bible,
go hand-in-hand.
When they don't...the science is wrong.
I don't know, I'm just a student.
I really like this,
blessings...

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
    Thanks again for your exceptional review and your interesting perspective on the piece. estory
reply by Irish Rain on 22-Mar-2022
    You're most welcome!!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Your poem is true. I happen to be a Christain and have certain beliefs that I refuse to discard. That being said one of my science professors in college said the more he studied science the more he believed in God. Hmm. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the excellent review and the wonderful words of support. estory
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Of the two parts written, both are well done. If I have to choose though, the author notes make better sense. Science, the art of discovering a clue that gives someone a thing to do without proving anything but their own conclusion.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the excellent review and your interesting perspective on the poem. estory
reply by Tom Horonzy on 15-Mar-2022
    idk. I am not James Joyce :))
Comment from BethShelby
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I guess some scientific theories have led to some things that have made our life better, but as you say many of the theories are just one way of interrupting the fact. Man has a desire to make a name for themselves by discovering something no one has thought of before. We do the creator of the universe has all the answers we seek and if need be when the time is right he might reveal some things. In the meantime as we grow older we are willing to leave it in his hands and God become our way of life.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the excellent review and I am glad the piece got people thinking. We need to think about where technology is taking us. estory
Comment from jessizero
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I liked your message. Science isn't perfect. Only God is perfect. Thank you for sharing this here. Keep up the good work. I wish you only the best.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the excellent review and your wonderful words of support. Keep the faith! estory
Comment from royowen
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Yes, indeed, when then they talk about a scientific "fact" all they mean is, it's the best explanation outside of God, God always means accountability, which to the proud, unbridled mind is unacceptable. I've often wondered why they don't actually try to price His lack of existence. But they can't, that's the trouble, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the excellent review and your wonderful words of support. We need to think about science, and always remember that it is, after all, just conjecture. estory
reply by royowen on 15-Mar-2022
    Well done
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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If things could just evolve, we should snap our fingers, or twitch our nose like Bewitched. The man above created us. You have a great poem posted on this page. Thank you.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the excellent review and your wonderful words of support. Keep the faith! estory
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 15-Mar-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from in777wr#
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This is a interesting poem. I have never thought about theories that way. Your message is clear in this poem. You give good example of types of theories in this poem. Nice job.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the excellent review and I am glad it got people thinking. estory
Comment from Raul1
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I think that It is very difficult to know all about astronomy theories. You need to study it in order to understand it. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the excellent review and your support for the piece. estory
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Your poem is very well done. Theories are just that, most of them waiting to be proven. But we can stand on the Word of God, because it has been proven over and over.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the excellent review and Keep the faith! estory
reply by Anne Johnston on 19-Mar-2022
    You are welcome