I'll Fight
25 Syllables from Ukraine12 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 25 Syllable Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the 25 Syllable Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Thanks for sharing it and your poem for Ukraine.
-You have used your 25 syllables very well.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the determination you show in this
as the Ukrainians are doing just what
you said, standing up for
"country to call my own."
-I like your concluding line and spirit!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Thanks for sharing it and your poem for Ukraine.
-You have used your 25 syllables very well.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the determination you show in this
as the Ukrainians are doing just what
you said, standing up for
"country to call my own."
-I like your concluding line and spirit!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Janetsue
This is very expressive and replicates the thoughts of many people and nations. In this nuclear age, the situation unfolds much too close to worldwide disaster. You have written a strong entry for the 25 syllable poem contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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This is very expressive and replicates the thoughts of many people and nations. In this nuclear age, the situation unfolds much too close to worldwide disaster. You have written a strong entry for the 25 syllable poem contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you for these wonderful comments
Comment from Ulla
Oh, I love this poem, and I like it a lot. I'm with you all the way. The anger I feel against that evil aggressor is quite hard to explain. But I feel a hatred and anger as I've never experienced before. Good luck in the contest and may he fail in his evil task. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Oh, I love this poem, and I like it a lot. I'm with you all the way. The anger I feel against that evil aggressor is quite hard to explain. But I feel a hatred and anger as I've never experienced before. Good luck in the contest and may he fail in his evil task. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much, yes I think anger is building all over the world
Comment from Tom Horonzy
If a 25 syllable makes any sense, and the majority don't, they do not deserve a bone, however saying so I give you SIX STARS because this small piece strikes home with authority. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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If a 25 syllable makes any sense, and the majority don't, they do not deserve a bone, however saying so I give you SIX STARS because this small piece strikes home with authority. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Wow! so many thanks, yes all the Ukrainians have now is bones
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A melancholy write about what is happening in Ukraine and there is determination in these words as fighting for one's freedom is something we seem to strive for against those who want total control, a life-long battle of good verses evil, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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A melancholy write about what is happening in Ukraine and there is determination in these words as fighting for one's freedom is something we seem to strive for against those who want total control, a life-long battle of good verses evil, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'I'll Fight', is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. With a minimum of words. This talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest.
My fingers are crossed for you.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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'I'll Fight', is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. With a minimum of words. This talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest.
My fingers are crossed for you.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
You're very welcome.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting poem and picture. The eye is shedding a bloody tear for the country and home. And a little humor is added as the dog wants your bone, unless you are thinking of a vicious dog. Not so amusing then.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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This is an interesting poem and picture. The eye is shedding a bloody tear for the country and home. And a little humor is added as the dog wants your bone, unless you are thinking of a vicious dog. Not so amusing then.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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I am seeing Putin as the dog and the Ukrainian people who have nothing left-maybe a bone
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-syllable poem, I'll Fight, has the proper syllable count and stresses the anger of the Ukrainians who have been thrust into war.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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This twenty-five-syllable poem, I'll Fight, has the proper syllable count and stresses the anger of the Ukrainians who have been thrust into war.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Beautiful witness to the world showing tears as the nations
are in shock. We can unite in prayers and donations. I like
the use of your colors and photo. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Beautiful witness to the world showing tears as the nations
are in shock. We can unite in prayers and donations. I like
the use of your colors and photo. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Wow! so many thanks, yes unite we must, these poor people need help
