God's Benediction
spiritual reflections2 total reviews
Comment from Leann DS
Great job, especially considering the constraints and demands required for this contest. You're submission makes sense and is natural flowing. Excellent contribution for the contest. Good luck to you. Hugs and blessings.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Great job, especially considering the constraints and demands required for this contest. You're submission makes sense and is natural flowing. Excellent contribution for the contest. Good luck to you. Hugs and blessings.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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thanks glad you liked it.
Comment from Jay Squires
the sheer madness of the beginning of world war 111 unfolding. [If I may make a small suggestion, change "world war 111" to "world war III". Use the capital "I" instead of the "1". I thought you were referencing something Biblical, and that there were, in fact, a hundred and eleven world wars. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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the sheer madness of the beginning of world war 111 unfolding. [If I may make a small suggestion, change "world war 111" to "world war III". Use the capital "I" instead of the "1". I thought you were referencing something Biblical, and that there were, in fact, a hundred and eleven world wars. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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thanks for the suggestion, I will go back and fix that.
