Happy Hostage Day
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Comment from Ricky1024
"Happy Hostage Day"
(A Contest Winner)
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis: The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures, Aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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"Happy Hostage Day"
(A Contest Winner)
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis: The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures, Aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Frank Malley
Anyone who has worked for minimum wage in a factory will know where this funny poem gets its juice. And for once, a hostage-taker is benevolent and aspires to justice, and not the vindication of some preposterous ideology. Years of tedious, repetitive, underpaid work burn out the soul and the body. As someone who worked several years in factories, I know why this poem is so enjoyable.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Anyone who has worked for minimum wage in a factory will know where this funny poem gets its juice. And for once, a hostage-taker is benevolent and aspires to justice, and not the vindication of some preposterous ideology. Years of tedious, repetitive, underpaid work burn out the soul and the body. As someone who worked several years in factories, I know why this poem is so enjoyable.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2022
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from LJbutterfly
I thoroughly enjoyed this poetic story. It was ingenious and creative and demonstrates real talent. I thought it should have been entered in a "Write a story in a poem" contest, which is held quite often on this site, with a cash prize. Since it was entered in the "Hostage" contest I think it will do well and I wish you the best.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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I thoroughly enjoyed this poetic story. It was ingenious and creative and demonstrates real talent. I thought it should have been entered in a "Write a story in a poem" contest, which is held quite often on this site, with a cash prize. Since it was entered in the "Hostage" contest I think it will do well and I wish you the best.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review..it means a lot to me. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A story about a corrupt millionaire. Sometimes millionaires or billionaires are miserable. This story sounds like the millionaire was miserable even though he owned a factory that employed several employees.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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A story about a corrupt millionaire. Sometimes millionaires or billionaires are miserable. This story sounds like the millionaire was miserable even though he owned a factory that employed several employees.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Its true. Money can't buy true happiness, only love and kindness can make you happy. Have a lovely evening. :)
Comment from poetwatch
Wow, this is a long story-poem, author. :) I liked it it kept me reading line by line. Your story is better when the truth was involved. :) By that, I mean that most millionaires are tight-ass that's why they got money. Thank you for sharing a fun write.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Wow, this is a long story-poem, author. :) I liked it it kept me reading line by line. Your story is better when the truth was involved. :) By that, I mean that most millionaires are tight-ass that's why they got money. Thank you for sharing a fun write.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. I fear it might have been a little TOO long, but I couldn't stop myself!, :) thanks again.
Comment from Wendy G
What a great story in a poem. You maintained the interest to the end - and justice was served. Well thought through and we'll written. Best wishes for success in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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What a great story in a poem. You maintained the interest to the end - and justice was served. Well thought through and we'll written. Best wishes for success in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you, that means a lot to me. I'm always glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Your poem flows nicely.. The rhymes don't seem forced. The structure makes sense. It drew on my emotions. It presents strong images. I would recommend.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Your poem flows nicely.. The rhymes don't seem forced. The structure makes sense. It drew on my emotions. It presents strong images. I would recommend.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for this great review, i really appreciate it. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a hilarious take on the 'Hostage' poetry prompt. You have rhymed everything very well and the rhythm is perfect throughout. I expect this epic tale will do very well in the contest. Thank you for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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This is a hilarious take on the 'Hostage' poetry prompt. You have rhymed everything very well and the rhythm is perfect throughout. I expect this epic tale will do very well in the contest. Thank you for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from John Ciarmello
Super job with this! I loved it! The content here is great, and the rhythm and rhyme all were perfect. It was all done without violence. Instead, a party. How refreshing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Super job with this! I loved it! The content here is great, and the rhythm and rhyme all were perfect. It was all done without violence. Instead, a party. How refreshing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love this one. It is certainly something different and such a fun read. I enjoyed every word and was tickled to see him get away with the money too. It should do well in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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I love this one. It is certainly something different and such a fun read. I enjoyed every word and was tickled to see him get away with the money too. It should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this great review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)
