Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

What a perfectly written piece. I thought until the end it was a person holding you hostage. Well done piece. I wish you much success with the contest.

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022

Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement!!

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

firstly, welcome to the site.

You might want to re-edit you title line to get rid of the errant code. As this is one of the first thing a prospective reader will see, it should be spot on.

Yep, I'm sure it's sentiments many folks will empathise with.

All the best
GMG

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022

Thank you for your words of encouragement! I did notice that my title wasn?t at all what I had written, but I had already submitted before I noticed that it said, "I??m.
Could you please help me correct this? This is the first contest I?ve ever written for & not sure how it happened.