That name!
Don't you dare call me ...29 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Bravo! I that did the trick. I thought you were going to come up with a nasty nickname for him! Another adorable family tale--you have an endless trove!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Bravo! I that did the trick. I thought you were going to come up with a nasty nickname for him! Another adorable family tale--you have an endless trove!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for your review. I always apply your reviews. I think I am just about out of stories!! Wish my memory was better.
Wendy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This is a good family story about brother versus sister or vice versa. I had a few of them myself. But in the end, we became friends and loved each other after the teasing calmed down.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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This is a good family story about brother versus sister or vice versa. I had a few of them myself. But in the end, we became friends and loved each other after the teasing calmed down.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you Rosemary. Yes - all was well in the end as we all grew up. Many thanks for your lovely review.
Wendy
Comment from Begin Again
And in this corner..... hurrah for you, Wendy. Those darn boys think they can back us into a corner and get their way all the time. Guess your brother learned a lesson or two.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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And in this corner..... hurrah for you, Wendy. Those darn boys think they can back us into a corner and get their way all the time. Guess your brother learned a lesson or two.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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He sure did! Thanks so much Carol for your super review.
I hope you are doing okay.
Wendy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the True Story writing prompt contest.
Hah hah I love your story. I love that you stood up for yourself with your bully brother.
Nice true story in its entirety and compelling in structure. The telling flows well.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the True Story writing prompt contest.
Hah hah I love your story. I love that you stood up for yourself with your bully brother.
Nice true story in its entirety and compelling in structure. The telling flows well.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Gypsy. A most encouraging and thoughtful review. Appreciated, as always.
Wendy
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
You now have 10 votes !
Thank you for sharing your family life with us.
Well I think your brother deserved that punch .. I would have thought being the eldest and a boy he would have wanted to support / protect his sisters ..
kids at school are already quite nasty amongst themselves...calling some considered outsiders , names.
Take care!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Ciao!
You now have 10 votes !
Thank you for sharing your family life with us.
Well I think your brother deserved that punch .. I would have thought being the eldest and a boy he would have wanted to support / protect his sisters ..
kids at school are already quite nasty amongst themselves...calling some considered outsiders , names.
Take care!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you Tempeste! Lovely review. I think he was just teasing, but what was funny to him was not funny for me.
Wendy
Comment from in777wr#
That was some story. No, I would not think he would say that again. This was a well told story. Your story was captivating from beginning to end. Nice job.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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That was some story. No, I would not think he would say that again. This was a well told story. Your story was captivating from beginning to end. Nice job.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you! What a super review. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Wendy
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You're welcome.
Comment from Marienkiefer
Oh, this one is very nice too.
-Well, in this story, it didn't hurt to get it off your chest.
-Nice flow in the story.
-Great dialogue section.
-Movement and action.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Oh, this one is very nice too.
-Well, in this story, it didn't hurt to get it off your chest.
-Nice flow in the story.
-Great dialogue section.
-Movement and action.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your super review. I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Wendy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well done!! That was a wonderful story of how, you, a skiiny young girl, triumphed over your older, but immature brother!! I would have loved to have seen his face!! Loved this one, well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Well done!! That was a wonderful story of how, you, a skiiny young girl, triumphed over your older, but immature brother!! I would have loved to have seen his face!! Loved this one, well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Sandra! Well, I remember his shocked face. Neither of us thought I would really do it! Lol. Thanks too for your good wishes.
Wendy
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It's a brilliant story, Wendy. I'm glad you wote it and shared it with us. xxx
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Congratulations!! I've just seen you won by a mile!! Highly deserved. xxxx
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Thank you so much Sandra. I am delighted and I?m delighted that you?re delighted! Lol. Hugs.
Wendy
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Lol, hugs back! xx
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your true family story. You did a nice job with the prompt. I can relate to this story as I too have an brother that is the oldest of my three siblings. He could do no wrong. Me and my sisters slept in one room while he had is own. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed reading your true family story. You did a nice job with the prompt. I can relate to this story as I too have an brother that is the oldest of my three siblings. He could do no wrong. Me and my sisters slept in one room while he had is own. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for reviewing! It is quite out of character - the first and only time I have ever punched anyone! Lol.
Wendy
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! It is out of character for you! I guess he pushed you beyond all you could tolerate. It sounds like you considered your options first so it was logically executed. And your brother learned his lesson!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Lol! It is out of character for you! I guess he pushed you beyond all you could tolerate. It sounds like you considered your options first so it was logically executed. And your brother learned his lesson!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for reviewing and for your good wishes. Yes, it is quite out of character - the first and only time I have ever punched anyone! Lol.
Wendy
