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A Hacker's War

There is an army of hackers.

11 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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I see your pointâ?¦..

In 2022, Nobel, a God-worshipping writer of antiwar literature, opened her laptop and hacked into Russia's dark web.

This sounds like total fiction to me, thus a non-starter in a nonfiction challenge.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
    Hello Bill. In the notes I referred to the hacker I was writing about. You will note I listed her Facebook page. The reference and story is real as written in my notes.
Comment from in777wr#
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This is a well written 18 word sentence. Your sentence is coherent. None of the words disallowed are present. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
    Thank you for your wonderful review.
reply by in777wr# on 20-Mar-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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An army of volunteer hackers is rising up in cyberspace to defend Ukraine, though internet specialists are calling on geeks and other "hacktivists" to stay out of a potentially very dangerous computer war.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you Rosemary!
Comment from Annmuma
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I think you met every contest rule and you made a point needing to be heard around the world. Very well done and I wish you success in the contest. You have my vote. ann

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you!
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet!

You have your first vote!

I liked the original idea to make the name of the hacker Nobel rather than go with Nobel prize which the other three competing went with.

The rest of the narrative is interesting .. many wars these days are fought in good part at a desk in front of a computer. ( cyber wars)

Keep safe!




 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Hello Franca... thanks so much!
reply by tempeste on 19-Mar-2022
    Nice to see you are posting .

    Keep safe!
Comment from lyenochka
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This is both clever and informative! Yes, there are many hackers in this war, Russian hackers disseminating false information and other hackers attacking the Russian websites. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much Helen.

Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
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The contest was sup[pose to be non-fiction but you have posted General Fiction. You may consider changing to avoid disqualification. Please do not mind the rating because it clearly stated non-fiction, Kit

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you for your note. I did go back and change the category to Non-Fiction. There is a hacker named Nobel Hacker... I noted her Facebook page in the notes.
reply by Kit Nongkhlaw on 19-Mar-2022
    OK, we do make mistakes and I am number one. Wishing you all the very best in the contest.
Comment from jessizero
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This was a good piece. It followed all of the requirements and guidelines, and it told a clear story. Thank you for choosing to share this here. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thank you.
Comment from Aubree Lorraine
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Great use of the given words. I liked this story. I enjoy seeing what people come up with when the contests have very tight constraints such as this one. Good luck!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thank you Aubree!

Comment from John Ciarmello
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Interesting how the unknown truth be told in such few words. This is a very direct piece of writing. I wish you much success with the contest. thanks for the read.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thank you John!