Jaws
Well, Jaws is Jaws, super film7 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very apt. I was following the plot to the very last word with amazement for retelling the story in 5-7-5- as completely as you did until the last word hit me like I was stepping on a cow patty. Wouldn't understood do better?
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Very apt. I was following the plot to the very last word with amazement for retelling the story in 5-7-5- as completely as you did until the last word hit me like I was stepping on a cow patty. Wouldn't understood do better?
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the review. Now that you mention it, I think you are right - it is a sort of anti-climax.
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You can edit it, and the word would be understood? Good luck.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet , you now have 2 votes!
I still remember I was scared to go to the toilet still weeks after seeing the movie.
I imagined Jaws would bite my butt... no kidding.
Reading your film review gave me chills .. I think I would still have an issue watching the film now .
I don't know how people enjoy swimming in the ocean .. there are so many monsters lurking below.
Keep safe!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Ciao mystery poet , you now have 2 votes!
I still remember I was scared to go to the toilet still weeks after seeing the movie.
I imagined Jaws would bite my butt... no kidding.
Reading your film review gave me chills .. I think I would still have an issue watching the film now .
I don't know how people enjoy swimming in the ocean .. there are so many monsters lurking below.
Keep safe!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks very much, glad you enjoyed. Hope I didn't give you a sleepless night...
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Actually , reading you won put a big smile on my face .. for once the committee voted for the right poem.
Ciao!
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Oooppppssss Sorry, I just noticed the last comment was sent to you by mistake it was for Pangalatic who won a committee contest with
Soul Flight.
His post was just above yours .
I wrote the Hobbit .. I saw it just a couple of months ago for the first time. Loved it.
I hope you have a great Sunday !
Ciao!
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
-Well shark week is either here or near. So a very timely piece.
-Your poem builds suspense, and paints various hues and degrees of fear... In my mind anyway.
-A very nice poem.
-You paint the picture well with words.
Good luck on your entry.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Hello,
-Well shark week is either here or near. So a very timely piece.
-Your poem builds suspense, and paints various hues and degrees of fear... In my mind anyway.
-A very nice poem.
-You paint the picture well with words.
Good luck on your entry.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks for a super review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-You have good descriptive words.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-The directions were not clear, but
a stacked 5-7-5 poem means more
than one verse.
-I looked at the other entries; one person
has 2 verses, some have 3, and one has 4.
-I would add at least one more to make
sure you qualify. If you send a reply to
this review, I will look at it again.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-You have good descriptive words.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-The directions were not clear, but
a stacked 5-7-5 poem means more
than one verse.
-I looked at the other entries; one person
has 2 verses, some have 3, and one has 4.
-I would add at least one more to make
sure you qualify. If you send a reply to
this review, I will look at it again.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the review, and the clarity - I didn't realise that. Probably a bit late for me to do anything about it this time, but I will know better if I enter another one. Thanks again.
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You are welcome. You can edit your poem anytime until it goes up for a vote. The directions weren't clear so it wasn't your fault.
Comment from LisaMay
You've got room to give us more, so please continue with this well-written summary. My understanding is that a stacked 5-7-5 isn't just one stanza, it is 2 or more stanzas.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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You've got room to give us more, so please continue with this well-written summary. My understanding is that a stacked 5-7-5 isn't just one stanza, it is 2 or more stanzas.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Ahh - thanks - is that what stacked means!
Will have a look.
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point. Each line is connected with the other lines well. Your message is clear. Very nice picture.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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This is a well written poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point. Each line is connected with the other lines well. Your message is clear. Very nice picture.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thanks very much for the review. Took the picture on a visit to the USA in 2012 - Houston aquarium.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Thatguypk
Very well done. This says everything that needs to be said about the movie Jaws. Everything else in the movie is just flannel... you've got right to the core of it. :-) Fun read.
PK
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Very well done. This says everything that needs to be said about the movie Jaws. Everything else in the movie is just flannel... you've got right to the core of it. :-) Fun read.
PK
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thanks. "...to the core of it" - just what I was hoping for.
