A Tragic Chapter
A very short story about a very short life. (280 characters)6 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great entry for the Very short story writing prompt contest. You captured my attention right away and held it all the way through.
It's so sad when a new born baby dies.
Good luck in the contest.
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Great entry for the Very short story writing prompt contest. You captured my attention right away and held it all the way through.
It's so sad when a new born baby dies.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Babies are so precious. When you wait and something happens, it is very tragic occasion. The parents can only pray and let God know how they feel, and whether they can cope with the loss.
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Babies are so precious. When you wait and something happens, it is very tragic occasion. The parents can only pray and let God know how they feel, and whether they can cope with the loss.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent story. Although a sad one. Fortunately it is fiction although I am sure many families experience such tragedy. Well written. It is hard to write a story with exactly 280 characters. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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Excellent story. Although a sad one. Fortunately it is fiction although I am sure many families experience such tragedy. Well written. It is hard to write a story with exactly 280 characters. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Parents lost their child born with physical defects and died can feel how tragic it is; well said, well done; post more; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Parents lost their child born with physical defects and died can feel how tragic it is; well said, well done; post more; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written story. This story was written with such clarity that I could feel for the parents. The last sentence was a powerful conclusion. Nice job.
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This was a well written story. This story was written with such clarity that I could feel for the parents. The last sentence was a powerful conclusion. Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
Comment from jessizero
This was a very short story, told in only a few characters, but it summed up a lifetime. Thank you so much for choosing to share this here. Best wishes.
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This was a very short story, told in only a few characters, but it summed up a lifetime. Thank you so much for choosing to share this here. Best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022