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When tables are turned...17 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
So, he didn't want to hear anything she said. She was well-paid for her protestations being ignored. You wrote a good story and successfully incorporated those Blahs.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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So, he didn't want to hear anything she said. She was well-paid for her protestations being ignored. You wrote a good story and successfully incorporated those Blahs.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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When we think we have a situation under our control (with no concern for others), we are apt to discover how totally wrong we viewed the situation. Thank you so much for the kind review. Have a great day!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery writer a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Blah Blah Blah contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Hello mystery writer a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Blah Blah Blah contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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When we think we have a situation under our control (with no concern for others), we are apt to discover how totally wrong we viewed the situation. Thank you so much for the kind review. Have a great day!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
So - during that blah, blah, blah, I sure hope he got his money's worth. Yowzer! That's not exactly how romance is supposed to go - but some girls are just working girls and don't have much time for Loo-OVE. haha
Thanks!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
So - during that blah, blah, blah, I sure hope he got his money's worth. Yowzer! That's not exactly how romance is supposed to go - but some girls are just working girls and don't have much time for Loo-OVE. haha
Thanks!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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I don't think there was any love involved on either side Lol
Comment from royowen
Ahh, victory quickly turned to defeat with a strategic withdrawal, fool man this should happen to people that are testosterone driven, when one's lust needs money, beautifully written my friend, touché indeed, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Ahh, victory quickly turned to defeat with a strategic withdrawal, fool man this should happen to people that are testosterone driven, when one's lust needs money, beautifully written my friend, touché indeed, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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I thank you so much for your kindness and understanding. I cringe when I think of anyone (not just a man) putting their needs before all others. Glad you enjoyed.
Have a great day!
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Most welcome
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
What an interesting use of the prompt - to describe an imagined scene that followed his lust and assumption that he'd have his way. She turned out to be not very nice herself, didn't she? But she did warn him, "You don't really know me."
Nice job:-)
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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What an interesting use of the prompt - to describe an imagined scene that followed his lust and assumption that he'd have his way. She turned out to be not very nice herself, didn't she? But she did warn him, "You don't really know me."
Nice job:-)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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I am thrilled you picked up on that line... I usually write mysteries and like to leave a clue or two...bread crumbs so to speak. Thank you for the review and taking the time to read my post. I appreciate it very much.
Have a great day!
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You're welcome.
Comment from jessizero
This was a funny blah blah blah story. I didn't know where that was going, but I definitely wasn't expecting that ending! Thanks for sharing this here!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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This was a funny blah blah blah story. I didn't know where that was going, but I definitely wasn't expecting that ending! Thanks for sharing this here!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my blah blah blah story. I haven't been able to write much lately, but my muse thought this was too good to miss. LOL Thank you so much.
Have a great day!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Such an enjoyable story. You had me from the first sentence and didn't let go until the end. This is well written and wildly descriptive. Nothing like reading something a little sexy on a Monday afternoon,(smile).
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Such an enjoyable story. You had me from the first sentence and didn't let go until the end. This is well written and wildly descriptive. Nothing like reading something a little sexy on a Monday afternoon,(smile).
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your kindness and for taking the time to read my post. I've not been able to write for a while and somehow this contest intrigued my muse. I am happy you enjoyed it.
Have a great day!
