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This was a sunrise that was completely Poem Worthy!62 total reviews
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well crated poem. Telling from your picture, that was a beautiful sunrise. I liked the consistent rhyming scheme throughout the poem. Your poem flows well. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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This is a well crated poem. Telling from your picture, that was a beautiful sunrise. I liked the consistent rhyming scheme throughout the poem. Your poem flows well. Nice poem.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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It truly was the most beautiful, but also the most eerie sunrise I had ever seen. Thank you for your very kind review! God Bless!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Moon baby
Absolutely gorgeous sunrise! No two identical, each one amazing, and I've seen a lot of them too! It makes me stand in awe of what a magnificent God made for us! This is a beautiful poem!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Absolutely gorgeous sunrise! No two identical, each one amazing, and I've seen a lot of them too! It makes me stand in awe of what a magnificent God made for us! This is a beautiful poem!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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It truly was the most beautiful, but also the most eerie sunrise I had ever seen. Thank you for your very kind review! God Bless!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
May we always be in total awe of many-faceted nature! Your skillfully written poem is vividly descriptive of an appreciative attitude toward nature. Sunrises and sunsets never get old, even as we do! :-)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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May we always be in total awe of many-faceted nature! Your skillfully written poem is vividly descriptive of an appreciative attitude toward nature. Sunrises and sunsets never get old, even as we do! :-)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Janice, you are so very sweet & I thank you for your kind review!
God Bless!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This isn't only a great poem, but the beautiful picture you chose fits your writing perfectly. The start of a new day and season is very uplifting as you have portrayed in your poem. I have no doubts as to where the beauty came from. There are no greater artists than our Lord. Good work.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This isn't only a great poem, but the beautiful picture you chose fits your writing perfectly. The start of a new day and season is very uplifting as you have portrayed in your poem. I have no doubts as to where the beauty came from. There are no greater artists than our Lord. Good work.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you once again for honoring my poem with a six star review!
I took this photo last fall & it was rather eerie, but it fascinated me enough to grab my phone to get a photo before it disappeared. You are so right about God's perfect artistic beauty!
Anyway I just can't express how much your review means to me! You are so very kind! I thank you again & God Bless!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
We have so much to be grateful for, and our beautiful sunrises, and sunsets, are indeed incredible. You have described it with poetic panache. But it also gives us pause for thought for those poor people who see nothing but dust from their destroyed homes. I pray God allows them to see this sunrise again soon. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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We have so much to be grateful for, and our beautiful sunrises, and sunsets, are indeed incredible. You have described it with poetic panache. But it also gives us pause for thought for those poor people who see nothing but dust from their destroyed homes. I pray God allows them to see this sunrise again soon. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Sandra, I thank you so very much for the kind review and words of encouragement! It is appreciated! God Bless!
Comment from oliver818
You capture the view out your window very well here with the beautiful imagery. I like you choice of the word 'glare' which is slightly negative but also powerful and intense. Thanks for sharing this
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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You capture the view out your window very well here with the beautiful imagery. I like you choice of the word 'glare' which is slightly negative but also powerful and intense. Thanks for sharing this
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Oliver, I love that you caught the feeling of the word glare. It almost felt like gloom & doom to me. You might say that it was eerie! I thank you so very much for the kind review and words of encouragement! It is appreciated! God Bless!
Comment from karenina
So true! The natural wonders are divine creations... Every dawn, every sun set-how lucky are we to be alive and experiencing such beauty? The other night the moon was amber, and as big as can be! I felt like I could reach up and touch it!
Karenina
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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So true! The natural wonders are divine creations... Every dawn, every sun set-how lucky are we to be alive and experiencing such beauty? The other night the moon was amber, and as big as can be! I felt like I could reach up and touch it!
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Once again, you are so very insightful & you always seem to understand my point of view. Thank you for your lovely review! God Bless!
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It's a nod to your skill that I am picking up your intent!
Comment from John Ciarmello
This a wonderful poem. All your stanzas are beautiful, but the first three for me were the most impactful. I with you much success with the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This a wonderful poem. All your stanzas are beautiful, but the first three for me were the most impactful. I with you much success with the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you John, for your incredibly kind review! You sound like you know exactly what I'm saying in those stanzas, like you've been there yourself. 😊 Thanks again & God Bless!
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
A lovely, well-rhymed poem that fits perfectly with this picture. Your comment about each one being different resonated with me, as I take a lot of sunrise pictures in Florida and when I look at the pictures, they're all unique. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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A lovely, well-rhymed poem that fits perfectly with this picture. Your comment about each one being different resonated with me, as I take a lot of sunrise pictures in Florida and when I look at the pictures, they're all unique. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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First, thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
I also love taking photos of sunrises & sunsets, as with such extreme season changes, we do have many that are beautiful. However, Lol, I wish I was a snowbird living in your area, as tomorrow we will probably have an invisible sunrise here in MN, and much snow on the horizon. Thanks again Pam & God Bless!
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You're in MN! My son lives in Minneapolis - right in the city. He's been there 8 years and loves it.
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That is so Awesome! We live about 50 miles from there.
Up until 2020, we were known for being MN Nice! Not sure they still think that way after the George Floyd crisis!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love it when the leaves change color. It adds texture to the world showing us how something great can come from something else. A death is the birth of something new.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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I love it when the leaves change color. It adds texture to the world showing us how something great can come from something else. A death is the birth of something new.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review Mia! We do have some of the most beautiful color displays here in MN, on an Autumn day! My husband and I love to travel the shore line of Lake Superior every year, as the beauty is beyond words. Thanks again & God Bless!
