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This was a sunrise that was completely Poem Worthy!62 total reviews
Comment from Bridge
A beautiful poem. Very well described. Very well written. Sunrises are really beautiful. I find it magical. Thanks for sharing
With regards and best wishes
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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A beautiful poem. Very well described. Very well written. Sunrises are really beautiful. I find it magical. Thanks for sharing
With regards and best wishes
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you once again Bridge! I truly appreciate your kind reviews!!
Comment from nomi338
It takes an intelligent, wise and loving creator to bring us continuously beautiful and wonderful sunrises, sunsets and just beautiful days in between the two. They always arrive on time, never early or late, but always on time.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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It takes an intelligent, wise and loving creator to bring us continuously beautiful and wonderful sunrises, sunsets and just beautiful days in between the two. They always arrive on time, never early or late, but always on time.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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I love reading what you write; whether it's a review or your creative work. You are on my list of authors, I truly want to follow! Thank you for your review!
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Thank you so much. You certainly know how to bring the biggest smile to my face.
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It goes both ways! 😊
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I love listening to the way you say things. You my friend, are a very wise man!
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Thank you for making my month.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A very creative description of the essence of a sunrise.
The poem and image are effectively and beautifully intertwined.
Thank you for sharing this piece.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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A very creative description of the essence of a sunrise.
The poem and image are effectively and beautifully intertwined.
Thank you for sharing this piece.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your incredibly kind words & encouragement for my poem.
It's so wonderful to find so many fellow authors, who have similar interests. Thank you again Sharon!
Comment from royowen
The early morning is a special time, I read and do the majority of my reviewing early in the morning with my my wife sleeping beside me. It was the first things I really saw after meeting the Lord for the first time. Beautifully written Debi, loved it, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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The early morning is a special time, I read and do the majority of my reviewing early in the morning with my my wife sleeping beside me. It was the first things I really saw after meeting the Lord for the first time. Beautifully written Debi, loved it, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Y'know Roy, Your messages are so beautifully written, whether it's a poem or a review. Your wife is a very lucky woman to be married to such a romantic poet!
I can't thank you enough for you kind words of encouragement! God Bless!
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The pleasure is mine Debi
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a beautiful and amazing photo, Debi. Your poem for it is well thought out. I like the rhymes, the flow, and most of all the message. Yes, God is in control of all. You are right about how some can't accept Him when they see a beautiful sunrise such as your photo.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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What a beautiful and amazing photo, Debi. Your poem for it is well thought out. I like the rhymes, the flow, and most of all the message. Yes, God is in control of all. You are right about how some can't accept Him when they see a beautiful sunrise such as your photo.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your incredibly kind words of encouragement for my poem.
At first the color of the sunrise, was a little scary.
But I knew there wasn't much time to capture such beauty, so that soon left my head.
I thank you again for your kind review, & nice to hear from you again. I look forward to reading some of your work soon.
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😊❤️😸
Comment from Sally Law
I agree. You must be in the Southern Hemisphere since you are entering Autumn. Spring is here in my native land, with pink, yellow, and lilac. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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I agree. You must be in the Southern Hemisphere since you are entering Autumn. Spring is here in my native land, with pink, yellow, and lilac. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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No Sally, I'm in MN. But right now everything is pretty blah outside & this picture is always on my mind, as I've been waiting to do something creative with it. So this morning when I saw this contest, I finally wrote my poem to go with it.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is an incredible photo and yes poem worthy. This is a good contest entry and should do very well. You must have gasped when you saw it. Your poem is well written. The rhymes work well and the pace is enjoyable.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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This is an incredible photo and yes poem worthy. This is a good contest entry and should do very well. You must have gasped when you saw it. Your poem is well written. The rhymes work well and the pace is enjoyable.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your incredibly kind words of encouragement for my poem.
At first the color of the sunrise, was a little scary.
But I knew there wasn't much time to capture such beauty, so that soon left my head.
I thank you again for your kind review.
Comment from jessizero
This poem was as beautiful as the sunset! Congratulations on that. Thank you for choosing to share your poem here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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This poem was as beautiful as the sunset! Congratulations on that. Thank you for choosing to share your poem here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Jessi, Thank you so much for your incredibly kind words of encouragement for my poem.
At first the color of the sunrise, was a little scary.
But I knew there wasn't much time to capture such beauty, so that soon left my head.
I thank you again for your kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I take it this picture was taken last year or some other time. It is quite a sight and I can easily see why and how it could inspire such a solid and well crafted poem.
Well done. Nothing to fix or change.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Hmm, I take it this picture was taken last year or some other time. It is quite a sight and I can easily see why and how it could inspire such a solid and well crafted poem.
Well done. Nothing to fix or change.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your incredibly kind words of encouragement for my poem.
Yes, I took this last fall, but have had it in the back of my head to someday use it creatively. At first the color of the sunrise, was a little scary.
But I knew there wasn't much time to capture such beauty, so that soon left my head.
I thank you again for your kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a beautiful poem that should get people up to watch the sunrise. You've also picked a lovely picture to goad them on. Very good poem that anyone can understand and delight in. I would suggest an apostrophe between God and s as it stands for God is. Drop comma after seen and one's. You have quite a talent. I'm glad you were able to get back to it.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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This is a beautiful poem that should get people up to watch the sunrise. You've also picked a lovely picture to goad them on. Very good poem that anyone can understand and delight in. I would suggest an apostrophe between God and s as it stands for God is. Drop comma after seen and one's. You have quite a talent. I'm glad you were able to get back to it.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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First of all, I love when someone cares enough to critique punctuation or spelling! I'm usually a stickler with it myself, but every once in a while I either write too fast, or my autocorrect kicks in w/o me catching it.
So thanks to you, I was able to go in to edit & make the corrections.
And once again Carol, thank you for your kind words of encouragement, regarding my poem. As soon as I get the chance I will check out more of your work, as what I have read so far is excellent!
