A Prayer
A short prayer22 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very nice and quite concise. If I could have said it better I may have entered but I find writing such short poetry trying. Good luck with this entry.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
Very nice and quite concise. If I could have said it better I may have entered but I find writing such short poetry trying. Good luck with this entry.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Tom. I also have trouble writing the short stuff.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Thank you for writing a short poem for the people of Ukraine.
If we all prayed at the same time maybe the call will be so loud that things will change quicker. There are no winners in war and I appreciate your thoughtfulness with this prayer.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
Thank you for writing a short poem for the people of Ukraine.
If we all prayed at the same time maybe the call will be so loud that things will change quicker. There are no winners in war and I appreciate your thoughtfulness with this prayer.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thanks, DD. Guns and prayers.
Comment from Aussie
Words hardly express our sorrow and anger at what Putin is doing to these peace-loving, Christian souls. I think you expressed our pain for them in your poem. Never thought to see cowardly war like this in my lifetime. K xx
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
Words hardly express our sorrow and anger at what Putin is doing to these peace-loving, Christian souls. I think you expressed our pain for them in your poem. Never thought to see cowardly war like this in my lifetime. K xx
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Kay. I keep thinking that I'm going to wake up from a bad dream.
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Read my latest post about Putin's demise!!
Comment from mrsmajor
Hi, Paul,
My hearts actually hurts when I see what's going on in Ukraine, I think of those people every day. It's beyond horrible, and I pray, for the end of this terrible war on a people that are trying so hard to get to safety. I'm with you...good 2-10-2 entry.
All the Best!
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
Hi, Paul,
My hearts actually hurts when I see what's going on in Ukraine, I think of those people every day. It's beyond horrible, and I pray, for the end of this terrible war on a people that are trying so hard to get to safety. I'm with you...good 2-10-2 entry.
All the Best!
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Victoria. There's a special place for Putin, and I hope he gets there really soon.
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I agree...quick, fast and in a hurry!
Comment from Bridge
You have done very well with the form. A lovely poem . It is really heartbreaking, the war in Ukraine. Thanks for sharing. All the best in the contest.
With regards
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
You have done very well with the form. A lovely poem . It is really heartbreaking, the war in Ukraine. Thanks for sharing. All the best in the contest.
With regards
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Bridge. I can't believe that something like this is happening while other countries sit by and watch.
Comment from harmony13
Such a heartfelt Prayer! The author's words are clear, heartfelt,
direct and creative. I pondered on this prayer and found it to be
an honest request to God. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is awesome and goes well with these words.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
Such a heartfelt Prayer! The author's words are clear, heartfelt,
direct and creative. I pondered on this prayer and found it to be
an honest request to God. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is awesome and goes well with these words.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Maria. I'd like to see God put this situation to the top of His list.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
This is a terse poem, containing few words, but so much meaning. The photo complements your words.
I believe the Ukrainian soldiers pray for courage and strength to endure. They are such courageous people.
Yours is an excellent prayer poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
Author,
This is a terse poem, containing few words, but so much meaning. The photo complements your words.
I believe the Ukrainian soldiers pray for courage and strength to endure. They are such courageous people.
Yours is an excellent prayer poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Cindy. You are right. The Ukrainians are a very courageous people.
Comment from Wendy G
A simple, meaningful, and heartfelt plea - which is echoed around the world. Your short prayer is beautifully written in its poignancy and simplicity, very powerful.
Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
A simple, meaningful, and heartfelt plea - which is echoed around the world. Your short prayer is beautifully written in its poignancy and simplicity, very powerful.
Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Wendy. The short stuff is a little difficult for me.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' A Prayer ' , is short, succinct and heart-wrenching. This talented poet's work was truth woven through each line. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
' A Prayer ' , is short, succinct and heart-wrenching. This talented poet's work was truth woven through each line. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Duchess. Always good to hear from you.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, a timely poem. Yes, the people of Ukraine need our prayers and so much more. Well-chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry,
I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
Hello author, a timely poem. Yes, the people of Ukraine need our prayers and so much more. Well-chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry,
I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks, LB, for the review and the good luck wish.