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A Prayer

A short prayer

22 total reviews 
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Amen! These poor souls need as many prayers as possible. The dramatic picture you added highlights the urgency of your words
Well done.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
    Thanks, Mary. Hopefully, that conflict will be over soon.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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This is a strong poem using few words. The artwork is intense and pulls you in, holds and then your writing releases at the end. Well done. We can only pray for the Ukrainian's. My hope is that things won't get worse.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
    Thanks, KL. I don't think things could get much worse.
Comment from nomi338
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Satan the Devil, the one causing the heartbreak of war and dissent, is no doubt pleased at the loss of life and destruction his hateful ways have caused. Those who are in harmony with him will face the ultimate fate of total destruction.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the review. You are right. Satan is having a field day.
Comment from jenintorre
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Your artwork and your words Match wonderfully and are very heartfelt. As for praying to God for an answer, well good luck with that. I think you surely must have a winning entry here. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
    Thanks, Jen. The Big Guy is sitting this one out so far.
Comment from robyn corum
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Wow! Paul,

This was so weird. I got a message saying you had posted something new. But when i came to look, it seems this is a blind contest! Soooo bizarre!

I wonder if the others are showing up like that??? Weird.

But a super message. Sweet, simple, to the point. Great job. Thank you!

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
    Thanks, Robyn. I had trouble entering the contest. That may have been why things got weird.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I am totally supportive of your sentiments here Paul. those poor citizens who have been invaded in this unprovoked attack, let's hope there is s solution soon, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
    Thanks, Christine. I can't get this conflict off my mind.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This strange that this writing prompt entry came into my PM box, since author's information isn't supposed to be displayed. Hmm, a mess up. I agree with your entry. Yes, let's pray for Ukraine's citizens. They did not ask for this, yet they're the ones who suffer.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
    Thanks, Barb. I had trouble entering the contest. That may be the reason for the mix up.
Comment from royowen
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I'll join with you in that prayer my friend. This is the best way to spend your words, writing your prayers and spending, the written word of God is as powerful as the spoken word, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
    Thanks, Roy. Prayers and guns are what is needed.
reply by royowen on 24-Mar-2022
    Only God is needed, the sword is man?s idea of solving problems,
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
    Sometimes we must stand up and fight
    And draw the sword against our foe
    Like Joshua did one starlit night
    Outside the walls of Jericho.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 2-10-2, A Prayer, has the right setup and takes a moment to send an appeal to God for the Ukrainian folks who are suffering under the merciless Russian invasion.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
    Thanks, Bill. Hopefully, God is taking appeals today.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork.
-The syllable count is good,
along with your prayer for Ukraine.
-Ukraine and its people need so many
prayers, and yours is a good example.
-A good entry; good luck.
-I appreciate you sharing it.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
    Thanks, Pam. This Ukrainian situation is unbelievable.
reply by Pam (respa) on 24-Mar-2022
    You are welcome, and it certainly is that and more.